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To separate indeed was tough
But I know you had strength within
To use your will to guide you
It battled those feelings inside you
Where you could be able to let go

I banish you now so never come back
Your words at his heart surely attacked
With misty eyes he obeyed you truly for once

Overshadowed by power his love couldn't stand
As worthy of honor with your heart in his hand
The goal was his victory over that Author's plot
So you wondered in his mind
Did your love take a decent sized spot

One moment to rethink it all do take
For this could have been a mistake
Dear Belle his heart was truly yours
'Twas a tragic flaw that the shut the doors
On hope for a moment, oh wait one more moment
Before he truly is unreachable
And with wit and might unstoppable
For that golden heart with time and grief
Could harden and denature into stone

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That Golden Heart

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, 9th March 2015 @ 05:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

He loved you but not enough
To separate indeed was tough
But I know you had strength within
To use your will to guide you
It battled those feelings inside you
Where you could be able to let go

I banish you now so never come back
Your words at his heart surely attacked
With misty eyes he obeyed you truly for once

Overshadowed by power his love couldn't stand
As worthy of honor with your heart in his hand
The goal was his victory over that Author's plot
So you wondered in his mind
Did your love take a decent sized spot

One moment to rethink it all do take
For this could have been a mistake
Dear Belle his heart was truly yours
'Twas a tragic flaw that the shut the doors
On hope for a moment, oh wait one more moment
Before he truly is unreachable
And with wit and might unstoppable
For that golden heart with time and grief
Could harden and denature into stone

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2015-03-09 05:25:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: That Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 09:24:42 AM AEST
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Very intricate poem.
Well done!

Re: That Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 07:54:50 AM AEST
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well written thanks for sharing

Re: That Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 08:51:30 PM AEST
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great write, i enjoyed reading this piece, it flowed so naturally, thanks for sharing...keep writing

Re: That Golden Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 02:38:27 PM AEST
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I've heard it said that there is no such thing as magic.
Until I came to this site I would have said the same thing but pieces like this have persuaded me to think otherwise.
Nice work.

Steve

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