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about a person that I met
she made a strong impression
one I will not soon forget

polite and respectful
more than is usually seen
with in 5 minutes around her
you would know just what I mean

so content as a lady
and country to the core
she is all a man could ever want
and still she's so much more

a mother and a friend
persistant on what must be
beautiful in every way
with a spirit wild and free

just a little poetry
to show the knots and whats
just my crazy little way
of saying that your hot

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)

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first impressions

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 08:21:03 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I want to tell a story
about a person that I met
she made a strong impression
one I will not soon forget

polite and respectful
more than is usually seen
with in 5 minutes around her
you would know just what I mean

so content as a lady
and country to the core
she is all a man could ever want
and still she's so much more

a mother and a friend
persistant on what must be
beautiful in every way
with a spirit wild and free

just a little poetry
to show the knots and whats
just my crazy little way
of saying that your hot

Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)

Copyright © thehotshotpoet ... [ 2015-03-06 08:21:03]
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Re: first impressions (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 08:36:33 AM AEST
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Very nice indeed.
We need more of those in this world.
Great read!

Re: first impressions (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmy79 on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 12:17:15 PM AEST
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Great quirky poem I liked the flow...good luck

Re: first impressions (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 10:05:44 PM AEST
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Now this is what I call good rhyming poetry. Such a heartfelt love poem.

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