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There is no sympathy
And he can play me
Like a symphony
He takes control
It has to be on his terms
And there are lessons
That I have to learn
I play naughty he plays strict
And he knows the places
I like to be kissed
It turns him on when
I pretend to fight
I'm his obedient servant
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Afternoon delight

Contributed by Kimmy79 on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 06:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He has that look in his eyes
There is no sympathy
And he can play me
Like a symphony
He takes control
It has to be on his terms
And there are lessons
That I have to learn
I play naughty he plays strict
And he knows the places
I like to be kissed
It turns him on when
I pretend to fight
I'm his obedient servant
His afternoon delight.

Copyright © Kimmy79 ... [ 2015-03-06 06:01:07]
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Re: Afternoon delight (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 07:13:49 AM AEST
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a good read kimmy,your words say much to the fellow poet of a lifestyle you seem to be unhappy with,to feel like a servant to any man is wrong & only you & your heart can correct it,, good luck to you.always keep in mind the heart always finds a way

Re: Afternoon delight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th March 2015 @ 06:58:13 AM AEST
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Gently erotic. Quite beautiful, really.

Re: Afternoon delight (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 12:24:37 PM AEST
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I guess being able to put truth and feeling in writing is truly a blessing and you do it well. .... Vic

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