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And then from side to side.
My hair whips with a sonic boom,
In futile efforts to keep up

I can't get my self to leave,
The confines of my head.
So maybe if I slam the brakes,
I'll come out the other side... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Getting Out of My Own Head

Contributed by xHeathenx on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 04:27:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I throw my head up and down,
And then from side to side.
My hair whips with a sonic boom,
In futile efforts to keep up

I can't get my self to leave,
The confines of my head.
So maybe if I slam the brakes,
I'll come out the other side...

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-02-28 04:27:41]
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Re: Getting Out of My Own Head (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 06:05:20 AM AEST
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Yep its got the flow and mojo........
I'm a fan of short and sweet
Well done once again
Jim

Re: Getting Out of My Own Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Saturday, 28th February 2015 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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It's different and had me laughing right off the bat! Last line threw me off though, but i think this poem was meant to do that! Good write

Wayne

Re: Getting Out of My Own Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd March 2015 @ 08:45:09 AM AEST
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Slamming brakes generally works for me. Sound advice. I do just the opposite. I try to keep others out of my head but, they still keep trying to get in there. Enjoyable poem. Thank you, Tim

Re: Getting Out of My Own Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 03:04:17 PM AEST
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Quirky and a little off the wall.
Nevertheless, it works for me!!!
If a poem can make you smile after a brutal week, it is a job well done.

Steve

Re: Getting Out of My Own Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Saturday, 14th March 2015 @ 07:49:06 PM AEST
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It makes me think of times I have tried to snap out of a daydream. ....... Vic

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