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our paths change for ease of flow,
(but note!),
each tributary loses passion,
victim of
life''s dilution, sluggish, slow.
Let your soul find the line to
mark twain your return to the primary flow;
climb, paddle, allow yourself back to the
one stream, (how smoothly the surface flies!)
when all was wonder and joy
through young, non-diluted eyes. . [comments] => 6 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Invierno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Return To Your Primary Flow

Contributed by Invierno on Sunday, 15th February 2015 @ 10:42:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Water Is Us;
our paths change for ease of flow,
(but note!),
each tributary loses passion,
victim of
life''s dilution, sluggish, slow.
Let your soul find the line to
mark twain your return to the primary flow;
climb, paddle, allow yourself back to the
one stream, (how smoothly the surface flies!)
when all was wonder and joy
through young, non-diluted eyes. .

Copyright © Invierno ... [ 2015-02-15 10:42:30]
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Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST
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Life is a contradictory thing isn't it? It's our existence, yet it's the very thing that allows us to lose sight of that very same thing. By living we lose sight of life, and by dying we no longer live, yet even in death some don't cease to live, for they were never truly living.

Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 12:07:26 AM AEST
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Life is a contradictory thing isn't it? It's our existence, yet it's the very thing that allows us to lose sight of that very same thing. By living we lose sight of life, and by dying we no longer live, yet even in death some don't cease to live, for they were never truly living.

Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 12:30:46 PM AEST
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i found this inspiring,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Monday, 16th February 2015 @ 09:29:25 PM AEST
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Nicely done.
Sf

Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 08:18:16 AM AEST
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I have to agree with xheathenx. Life passes us by faster and faster every day we live, and our creations and ideas are all we leave behind. It is so interesting how many people live in the past and fail to live in the moment. I know that i am guilty of it, and i am extremely aware of it. I worry for those who are not. So much time spent frivolously and with no thought to the future. Imagine a world where that no longer required menial labor to function. That would be my dream.

Re: Return To Your Primary Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Sunday, 1st March 2015 @ 12:32:38 PM AEST
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Great read, very smooth. And as for me, I have been away. Just returning to my primary flow.

Best,

Fox

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