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Array ( [sid] => 180543 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Mess With Me. [time] => 2015-02-14 14:33:03 [hometext] => Poem (song) about our stupid (atheistic) educational system. [bodytext] => Don't mess with me, Don't insult me,
I have learned "self esteem", you see.
Get out of my face, Don't slow my pace,
I do not cringe; but, I get revenge.

What I say rules,You'll pay your dues,
I'll do you harm; even break your arm.
If me you cross, It'll be your loss,
I'll do you in, for that great sin.

Some people say, we should be meek,
Humble too, and turn the other cheek;
But our Atheist school, teach'es my rule,
What'll it be, do you do you agree with me?

Chorus
I'm a guy of pride,I'll tan your hide,
I'll cause you pain, put you to shame,
I'm great and I'm free, so don't mess with me.

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Don't Mess With Me.

Contributed by lionel on Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 02:33:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Don't mess with me, Don't insult me,
I have learned "self esteem", you see.
Get out of my face, Don't slow my pace,
I do not cringe; but, I get revenge.

What I say rules,You'll pay your dues,
I'll do you harm; even break your arm.
If me you cross, It'll be your loss,
I'll do you in, for that great sin.

Some people say, we should be meek,
Humble too, and turn the other cheek;
But our Atheist school, teach'es my rule,
What'll it be, do you do you agree with me?

Chorus
I'm a guy of pride,I'll tan your hide,
I'll cause you pain, put you to shame,
I'm great and I'm free, so don't mess with me.

Copyright © lionel ... [ 2015-02-14 14:33:03]
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Re: Don't Mess With Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 02:37:23 PM AEST
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I have to say this is quite different, but none the less, a good write.

Thanks for sharing

Wayne

Re: Don't Mess With Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 05:10:19 PM AEST
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Not atheistic school, secular school. There are theistic schools, but they're generally private schools. Public schools don't teach religious beliefs because first and foremost, there's a vast number of religions, your religion is not best because you believe it. Sorry.

But the act of violence(hopefully this is metaphorical) in faith's sake is wrong. Because faith is not truth, faith is believing or choosing to believe when truth cannot be obtained. You, I, we, all and everyone have faith, for we are all ignorant to one thing or another, no matter how much we deny it.

So to threaten breaking arms, to threaten bodily harm, you are being horribly vicious, aggressive, over something you can't even prove. There will always be theists AND atheists throwin their opinions, beliefs, and faiths in your face. These are individuals, and there's near 7 BILLION other people out there, a large amount of which believe both in the philosophies of theism and that of atheism, and have faith in many senses around them. Needless to say, there are plenty of theists/Christians who worship and mind their own, as well as atheists. I myself do not share my opinion unless it truly important. And so I must say now, while I keep my opinion to myself, I completely respect anybody else's opinion, and I cannot respect ANY calls of violence from either side of the fence. That is wrong and sinful, and it's over a maybe that one person agrees with.

There's a good flow here, but the poem and it's message, I can't enjoy.

Re: Don't Mess With Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 06:40:49 PM AEST
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i loved it

Re: Don't Mess With Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 07:04:38 AM AEST
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Hi there

I agree with xHeathenx one needs to restrain from violence. The poem itself is good you have a real talent however would better be used on poetry that is not so negative. Wisdom comes with time Great write. God bless.

Greetings
Rus

Re: Don't Mess With Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 23rd July 2022 @ 01:09:23 AM AEST
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Very unique...

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