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Array ( [sid] => 180527 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SORRY [time] => 2015-02-13 08:03:36 [hometext] => never enough, tough love [bodytext] => why did I do the things I did to you?
I didn't plan it anyway,
but I know that it's not enough to say-sorry

I didn't think my thoughts affected you
now I know different than before
but I know that it's not enough to say -sorry

I guess you'd love to even up the score
to see me lay crying on the bedroom floor
but you know that it's not enough to say-sorry

I can't understand myself
so how can I expect you to?
do you think all of my I'm sorry' s
will ever be enough for you?
and if not does this mean that you think we are through?
And if so ,then be honest and say that you do
I'm so ,so sorry

but are you sorry too?

.

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SORRY

Contributed by alicewhite on Friday, 13th February 2015 @ 08:03:36 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

why did I do the things I did to you?
I didn't plan it anyway,
but I know that it's not enough to say-sorry

I didn't think my thoughts affected you
now I know different than before
but I know that it's not enough to say -sorry

I guess you'd love to even up the score
to see me lay crying on the bedroom floor
but you know that it's not enough to say-sorry

I can't understand myself
so how can I expect you to?
do you think all of my I'm sorry' s
will ever be enough for you?
and if not does this mean that you think we are through?
And if so ,then be honest and say that you do
I'm so ,so sorry

but are you sorry too?

.

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2015-02-13 08:03:36]
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Re: SORRY (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 13th February 2015 @ 09:13:41 AM AEST
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Hey I really love this...No hidden agenda, just a straight-up write from the heart. The true strength is in your ending. When you realize it takes two to tango, and the blame is not solely yours alone. Wonderful to realize your self worth.

Keep it up.

~Scorp

Re: SORRY (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Friday, 13th February 2015 @ 11:42:35 AM AEST
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I agree with Scorp. The ending, pulls it up from the darkness of being a victim of one's self, and makes thing fair, balanced, where they should have been. Now to hope the one who reads can do the same(effectively).

Nice work Alice. :)

Re: SORRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th February 2015 @ 03:59:43 AM AEST
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Hey Alice, first time a real voice doing a real dance and it sings, never enough tough love which sounds icky.
It's haunting and I love it/ yet hate it simultaneously
because I'm sorry too. You are so clever with words even when they're simple. You've got it going on here lady...
Damn it, the whole world is sorry. We F'd up big time...
What can we do? Why not reciprocate, reciprocate, reciprocate....

Love you!
Peace!

Re: SORRY (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 23rd February 2015 @ 11:44:09 PM AEST
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Ahh Honesty
a lost art in this world we live in,
thanx for sharing.

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