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[sid] => 180511
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Storage
[time] => 2015-02-10 12:23:44
[hometext] => I plan to give this poem to my fiancé on Valentine's day, we have a long engagement of 18 months. Any comments/critiques are very appreciated:
[bodytext] => I used to write poetry No doubt fueled by a potent soup of teenage hormones Then I met you, and I thought I had no more need of rhymes So I packed up my poem books And put them in storage I used to have dishes “Table for two,” a set from my aunt a care package at school Then I moved home, and they said I had no need of spare dishes So I packed up my plates and my cups And put them in storage A lifetime of waiting, now counting down until our packing boxes finally meet in the same bedroom Love, if you wait for me I’ll set our table for two And we’ll stack up all the empty boxes and put them in storage [comments] => 3 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 2 [informant] => toomuchfreetime [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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