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It Hurts
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 02:04:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it breaks
torn into pieces
"is it supposed to feel like this"
"will it last forever?"
the questions i ask myself
when i felt a hole
where my heart used to be
yet it only gets bigger
more painful
more noticeable
whenever i think of you
i love you
and i still do
so....why don't you love me back?
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2015-02-09 14:04:16]
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Re: It Hurts
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 9th February 2015 @ 04:07:34 PM AEST
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Unreciprocated love is a troublesome thing.
As for whether this is love now, or the struggle of letting go, it is unclear, but the mention of the hole makes me think of a past love.
No matter how harsh the fire of passion burn your heart, leaving holes, the size of cigarette cherries, the embracing of the pain as a source to remind yourself of what you had, and what you've gained in experiences and experience alike, your relationship and love then become more fruitful, in metaphor and truth. :) |
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