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Array ( [sid] => 180473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Plaster Ecosystem [time] => 2015-02-07 05:08:28 [hometext] => An artistic plaster mold holds the source of reaction. The stimuli everchanging. The results? Ever attempting to keep up. [bodytext] => Picture a cast of pale plaster
Unique with contours and colors
Soft primary blues
Sharp primary reds

Physique completed with
A top-oriented dome
Yellow-orange light shines from the sun
Dim remnants reaching in well-received

Startled moths seek the luminescence
Fuel for the drive of their behavior
They crash against the walls
Using all their might

The insects ultimately fail
To escape the artistic prison
After the sun recedes
Reds and grays seep in

The nocturnal winged-creatures
Rush for the bottom of the posterior
To flee, do something at least
Anything but stand still

These fleeting beams of lights
Are ever cycling
Disturbing the peace
Of the plaster ecosystem [comments] => 2 [counter] => 132 [topic] => 73 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Plaster Ecosystem

Contributed by xHeathenx on Saturday, 7th February 2015 @ 05:08:28 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Picture a cast of pale plaster
Unique with contours and colors
Soft primary blues
Sharp primary reds

Physique completed with
A top-oriented dome
Yellow-orange light shines from the sun
Dim remnants reaching in well-received

Startled moths seek the luminescence
Fuel for the drive of their behavior
They crash against the walls
Using all their might

The insects ultimately fail
To escape the artistic prison
After the sun recedes
Reds and grays seep in

The nocturnal winged-creatures
Rush for the bottom of the posterior
To flee, do something at least
Anything but stand still

These fleeting beams of lights
Are ever cycling
Disturbing the peace
Of the plaster ecosystem

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-02-07 05:08:28]
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Re: Plaster Ecosystem (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 7th February 2015 @ 03:03:37 PM AEST
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Wow. Just wow. Your imagery was fantastic. Great write!

Re: Plaster Ecosystem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th February 2015 @ 11:09:40 PM AEST
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you know, no, you can't how could you,
But I just read your poem after a rain storm
I was in my backyard this night and could
see the big dipper and well sadly that is an unusual site where I live.

Artist who draw or paint like to sometimes sit out in fields all day long adjusting for natural lights and the changing shadows

Your poem evokes the changes that are seen on a different level, those magical sites seen by smaller creatures

This reminds me a little of Burroughs yet not
awoken
Colors are things, like a magical forest shrinking before ones eyes
Colors are hope and wisdom and piety
Colors are romanticism's filled with expression
of light

This is very nice. I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you!

Peace!

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