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Array ( [sid] => 180460 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Interplanetary Dilemma [time] => 2015-02-06 05:37:54 [hometext] => The premise of the poem comes from an amazingly vivid dream I had, which was ripe with action. The poem itself? Relevant to myself I'd say. [bodytext] => I awake upon a field of dirt and rock
Not knowing how I got here
Starships fight in the skies
Making them all but clear

Man-made factories spout out
From the brown dusty soil
I quickly seek safe refuge
A truly arduous toil

Man has shown his many strengths
A new chapter in his tome
By terraforming the rock
Closest to his home

I need to find a way to escape
Leave this hellish front
For the growing insurrection
Will purge the present brunt

I stumble upon a desolate ship
And am left to make
A decision between the sides
Should one of them I take? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 114 [topic] => 19 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Interplanetary Dilemma

Contributed by xHeathenx on Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 05:37:54 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I awake upon a field of dirt and rock
Not knowing how I got here
Starships fight in the skies
Making them all but clear

Man-made factories spout out
From the brown dusty soil
I quickly seek safe refuge
A truly arduous toil

Man has shown his many strengths
A new chapter in his tome
By terraforming the rock
Closest to his home

I need to find a way to escape
Leave this hellish front
For the growing insurrection
Will purge the present brunt

I stumble upon a desolate ship
And am left to make
A decision between the sides
Should one of them I take?

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-02-06 05:37:54]
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Re: Interplanetary Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 09:46:18 AM AEST
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Love your thoughts in this piece. The rhythm and rhyme such an effortless flow.

Re: Interplanetary Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 06:32:48 PM AEST
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wow, just like these lyrics, you hit a chord

Gary Numan
Were in the building where they make us grow
And I'm frightened by the liquid engineers
Like you

My mallory heart is sure to fail
I could crawl around the floor just like I'm real
Like you

The sound of metal I want to be you
I could learn to be a man
Like you

Plug me in and turn me on
Oh everything is moving

I need my treatment its tomorrow they send me
Singing I am an american
Do you?

Picture this if they could make the change
Id love to pull the wires from the wall
Did you?

And who are you and how can I try?
Here inside I like metal
In you

All I know is no one dies
I'm still confusing love with need

Re: Interplanetary Dilemma (User Rating: 1 )
by Qas on Thursday, 12th February 2015 @ 04:28:17 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved that!

I'm jealous of the dream and inspired by the theme ;p

Really, really good!!

I will definitely come back later and see what else you've created. :)

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