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Array ( [sid] => 18043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unworthy [time] => 2003-05-26 14:05:00 [hometext] => commentz please! [bodytext] => He can see inside me
He knows I’m truly sorry for what I’ve done
Just because I don’t tell him directly
Does that mean I can’t be his little one?

And because I’m scared, here on Earth
And cannot foreclose to anyone my sins
Does that mean that when I knock at his door
I will not be let in?

If I’m forced to keep a secret
So dark it makes fear a daily resident of my veins
Will he deny me Christ
Because of this humanly fear he created in the first place?

And if my mind is completely lost
A mind created by the Lord
If the pain drives it to break
Paying the one debt that I can’t afford

Shall I be sent to an even worse hell
Than the hell on Earth that I serve?
Will I be shunned into darkness
Getting the torture that I deserve?

Shall I be denied
A light I never knew
All because I’m unworthy
To try and speak to you? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 11 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
Unworthy

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



He can see inside me
He knows I’m truly sorry for what I’ve done
Just because I don’t tell him directly
Does that mean I can’t be his little one?

And because I’m scared, here on Earth
And cannot foreclose to anyone my sins
Does that mean that when I knock at his door
I will not be let in?

If I’m forced to keep a secret
So dark it makes fear a daily resident of my veins
Will he deny me Christ
Because of this humanly fear he created in the first place?

And if my mind is completely lost
A mind created by the Lord
If the pain drives it to break
Paying the one debt that I can’t afford

Shall I be sent to an even worse hell
Than the hell on Earth that I serve?
Will I be shunned into darkness
Getting the torture that I deserve?

Shall I be denied
A light I never knew
All because I’m unworthy
To try and speak to you?




Copyright © BlackFire9786 ... [ 2003-05-26 14:05:00]
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Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:28:09 PM AEST
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Wow....pretty powerful stuff!! Great poem! It's my opinion that your relationship with God is between you and God. No matter what we've done wrong...He'll always forgive us when we are truly sorry. Hope it helps! XoXo


Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by UnleashedFuture on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:38:55 AM AEST
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I've never been a religious man. I've always felt that the values given in the scripture were the virtuous ones that we should all live by everyday. I feel that God is within us all. So for forgiveness you must only seek it in yourself first. Even though I don't follow organized religion I do love the poem.


Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:11:32 AM AEST
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This is a cracking poem, great work, i love it to bits


Re: Unworthy (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:47:15 AM AEST
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very powerful stuff. i applaud again. great write sis. ewwwy! i just sneezed and got sneezy stuff all over our kitty! haha. remember: you're not unworthy of anything. God loves you no matter what...and so do i! love, peace, and chicken grease!
Love,
your only twin




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