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[sid] => 18041
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => My Treasure
[time] => 2003-05-26 13:05:00
[hometext] => this is about this special treasure (its a treasure to me, others its not i dont think) but it makes me feel happy when im feeling down and helps to make me feel alright....not gonna tell ya what the treasure actually is, read and find out! =)
[bodytext] => I go out to see my treasure everyday It is only, but a walk away When I get to feeling frustrated And have these feelings of hatred I have to go out to this special place To help remove the evil from my face Because that's why it was made With my own two eyes I see, The beauty of this place gathering And I stop to listen to natures hymns It helps me not feel so bad about my sins All these words that I have been writing They're all true, the emotions I have trouble fighting, This place kills them for me So I climb up apon the highest rock And walk over to the edge and look below Seeing the beauty of this place Is the best thing that's happened in my life And I wish that I could share it with you But this is the treasure that I know, this is the treasure that I love basically my "treasure" is this place thats by my house out in the woods with all these trails, and theres all these huge rocks to climb and its just really pretty out there...and theres this creek that on the other side theres this waterfall that feeds it the water and its just really awesome....well didnt know how to put what i just said into my poem exacty, but just thought id make clear what my "treasure" actually is so youre not totally lost (didnt wanna tell what it was up in the notes cause that woulda given it away! now that's no fun is it? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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