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Array ( [sid] => 18038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Day And Night [time] => 2003-05-26 11:35:00 [hometext] => Here I go agan, my pen is my sword, To my wife so much love and more.

The Phantom [bodytext] => I look past the gray, and I see you,
Teardrops fall like rain, glisen like morning dew,
The night comes day runs away, that's when the stars come out to play,
I pick the closest one to me, and I say a phase,
Peace be my journey, God lead my way,

By the light of the moon, I will ride to your room,
In your dreams I came, in the flesh I'm ashamed,
Your beauity like the rose, enlightens my soul,
Look into my eyes, can't you see it's the mask I hide behind,
I'm scared to show my face, it's grim and out of place,

A touch as soft as velvet, if I close my eyes I can feel it,
From the murkey dephts of hell, my heart will yell,
Dream on my love, I will be there by the raising of the sun,
As I approach your bed, the sun barely breaks, I sceam as you awake,
I'm drawn back from which I came, all the while calling your name,

Though I have nothing, I leave you with something,
A single yellow rose upon a mask, with I love you written on the glass,
Back to the fires of hell I go, standing in flames but feeling so cold,
The moon sleeps, as the sun takes flight,
You are day, I am night.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 11 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 2 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Day And Night

Contributed by The_Phantom on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I look past the gray, and I see you,
Teardrops fall like rain, glisen like morning dew,
The night comes day runs away, that's when the stars come out to play,
I pick the closest one to me, and I say a phase,
Peace be my journey, God lead my way,

By the light of the moon, I will ride to your room,
In your dreams I came, in the flesh I'm ashamed,
Your beauity like the rose, enlightens my soul,
Look into my eyes, can't you see it's the mask I hide behind,
I'm scared to show my face, it's grim and out of place,

A touch as soft as velvet, if I close my eyes I can feel it,
From the murkey dephts of hell, my heart will yell,
Dream on my love, I will be there by the raising of the sun,
As I approach your bed, the sun barely breaks, I sceam as you awake,
I'm drawn back from which I came, all the while calling your name,

Though I have nothing, I leave you with something,
A single yellow rose upon a mask, with I love you written on the glass,
Back to the fires of hell I go, standing in flames but feeling so cold,
The moon sleeps, as the sun takes flight,
You are day, I am night.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




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Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:57:32 PM AEST
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Wow this is so beautiful,I'm sure she will love it as well! Great write! Christina


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful Babe. Thank you! I love you too!!


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:22:47 PM AEST
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Awww Matt...this is awesome!!
Keep that sword going!!!
Jenni


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:36:56 PM AEST
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excellent beautiful write...well said statement of your love
Shari


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 01:33:52 AM AEST
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This is my favourite of all your poems ... so tragically romantic - so well written... heartbreaking, but so full of love ... Jan


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 02:44:49 AM AEST
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Wow! it is fantastic..very touching..very intense...very beautiful.. venkat


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:23:10 PM AEST
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Thank you all, you have truly made my night, Thank you once agan. Much love

The Phantom


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 04:29:45 PM AEST
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i believe these teardrops that fall like rain from your eyes are tears of love and happiness for your beautiful wife whom you love so very much, and the dream is one where you pinch yourself and find you are awake:) ~hugs n' love to you both, nessa


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:12:06 PM AEST
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Wow this is a beautiful poem, so sad but full of love, my heart goes out to you. I love all of your work, and this is among my favorites. Keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:46:27 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your wonderful comments, they are the things that keep this man writing. Thank you.

The Phantom


Re: Day And Night (User Rating: 1 )
by EyesRustedShut on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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Cool poem... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com




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