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You and I
Forgotten memories
We would deny

Passionless love
We knew so well
Futureless past
We dwelled in hell

Victimless crime
We did our time
Rhythm less sync
For you and I

Forwardly reversed
A friendly curse
Unprepared and rehearsed

Outgoingly shy
Visionless love
Blindingly clear
Silently terse

Truthful lies
Happy life
Full of despise

Depressed euphoria
Frowned happiness
Wink of sadness
A tearful smile

Forever short
However long
You and I
Had love
All along
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Clearly Blind Was I

Contributed by JamesStockdale on Friday, 16th January 2015 @ 10:41:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Sleepless dreams
You and I
Forgotten memories
We would deny

Passionless love
We knew so well
Futureless past
We dwelled in hell

Victimless crime
We did our time
Rhythm less sync
For you and I

Forwardly reversed
A friendly curse
Unprepared and rehearsed

Outgoingly shy
Visionless love
Blindingly clear
Silently terse

Truthful lies
Happy life
Full of despise

Depressed euphoria
Frowned happiness
Wink of sadness
A tearful smile

Forever short
However long
You and I
Had love
All along

Copyright © JamesStockdale ... [ 2015-01-16 10:41:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 18th January 2015 @ 07:15:22 AM AEST
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I'm glad to see you dropping thoughts to paper...very healthy, and it will help in your relationship(s).

I appreciate honesty and that you didn't hold back- it takes a certain fearlessness to do that- even to people you never meet, like on here. It's not just them you are baring yourself to, but yourself as well, and that is where honestly working out your inner turmoil can so productive.

Keep it up!

Invierno

Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 07:16:27 PM AEST
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Remarkable. I hope it's just fiction, for your sake.

Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:40:54 AM AEST
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//// You have definitely got the flow goin` on in this one but what I love most about it is the apparent diametric in this!!! *applauds*

Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 05:42:32 AM AEST
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//// The title too!!!

Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2020 @ 05:25:21 AM AEST
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// I`m back because I really like this poem.

Re: Clearly Blind Was I (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 5th December 2021 @ 01:24:40 PM AEST
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The yin to your yang. Beautifully put.

~Scorp

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