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Array ( [sid] => 180281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LET ME in [time] => 2015-01-13 01:55:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => she whispered, your heart, your mind, your soul.. you wont let me in.

i plead, the deepness i conceal only released to a close friend...

her voice chanted, but am i not more than a friend?

my direct approach, lust filled desires! we indulge the skin!

she wept, so i'm merely a pawn, a partner in our dance of sin.

my sorrow, its not about the intimate, more of the time we put in.

she shrieked! that makes no sense.. u just.., you wont let me in

reluctantly, i guess i was hurt and my wounds haven't reached their mend

her agitation, to reach your emotion how much time do we have to spend

my resentment, it has no meter, i just don't know! please don't start this again

her disgust, i never met any one.., i'm always here for u, not them!

acknowledging lost, they're there just to listen, they didn't beat me down demanding to be my friend, and as you turn to leave they see the welcome, come on in.. just to listen, sit think, cry about something that hurts deep with in.... u want to know so much, my heart, mind, soul you want in!!! but for some reason you cant seem to be my friend...

she leaves me lonely.......
The End [comments] => 1 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 22 [informant] => evolon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
LET ME in

Contributed by evolon on Tuesday, 13th January 2015 @ 01:55:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



she whispered, your heart, your mind, your soul.. you wont let me in.

i plead, the deepness i conceal only released to a close friend...

her voice chanted, but am i not more than a friend?

my direct approach, lust filled desires! we indulge the skin!

she wept, so i'm merely a pawn, a partner in our dance of sin.

my sorrow, its not about the intimate, more of the time we put in.

she shrieked! that makes no sense.. u just.., you wont let me in

reluctantly, i guess i was hurt and my wounds haven't reached their mend

her agitation, to reach your emotion how much time do we have to spend

my resentment, it has no meter, i just don't know! please don't start this again

her disgust, i never met any one.., i'm always here for u, not them!

acknowledging lost, they're there just to listen, they didn't beat me down demanding to be my friend, and as you turn to leave they see the welcome, come on in.. just to listen, sit think, cry about something that hurts deep with in.... u want to know so much, my heart, mind, soul you want in!!! but for some reason you cant seem to be my friend...

she leaves me lonely.......
The End




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Re: LET ME in (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 08:01:27 PM AEST
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This was sad




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