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Array ( [sid] => 180249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hallowed Spaces [time] => 2015-01-09 23:20:25 [hometext] => Back from the holidays [bodytext] => The Moon rises high.
Vindictive,
It casts porcelain shadows,
Like a fan of knives.
Under its waxing and waning
I feel lycanthropic.
Trembling in its magnetic power.
Drawn away from my humanity,
Into a feral landscape,
Untouched, unencumbered by restraint or bias.
Salubrious this place.
Resting without presupposition.
I dreamt of her again,
She still waits for me.
Safe in the hollow of love we carved out.
A carbon copy of our reality. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 453 [topic] => 64 [informant] => deadreckoning1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Hallowed Spaces

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Friday, 9th January 2015 @ 11:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

The Moon rises high.
Vindictive,
It casts porcelain shadows,
Like a fan of knives.
Under its waxing and waning
I feel lycanthropic.
Trembling in its magnetic power.
Drawn away from my humanity,
Into a feral landscape,
Untouched, unencumbered by restraint or bias.
Salubrious this place.
Resting without presupposition.
I dreamt of her again,
She still waits for me.
Safe in the hollow of love we carved out.
A carbon copy of our reality.

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2015-01-09 23:20:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 12:09:32 PM AEST
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Far out and awesome.

Invierno

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 05:01:57 PM AEST
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All I have is wow!
K

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 10th January 2015 @ 11:59:20 PM AEST
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wow is right.....

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th January 2015 @ 04:04:38 AM AEST
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I loved it!!!

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th January 2015 @ 10:21:01 AM AEST
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ARH-WOOOOOOOOOO!

I learned a new word. :)

Well aren't you announcing yourself loud and proud in 2015. What an enticing write! Of course the moon makes your crabbiness ball out.
Thrilling to read, keep it up.

~Scorp

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Wednesday, 14th January 2015 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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A new word I see ^-^

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 24th February 2015 @ 01:43:12 PM AEST
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You are a very good poet. This is a stunning piece of writing you have here! And if I have not said it I am impressed.

(I remember you from ten years ago, It is funny how time matures us, I don't mean age, I mean substance).

I don't post as I did back then, but I am still enthralled with being a member of this site.

Re: Hallowed Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 08:54:10 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully exquisite!

hugs n' love nessa

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