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Array ( [sid] => 180105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Resurrect [time] => 2014-12-22 22:18:02 [hometext] => it's Christmas -- time for miracles ~ [bodytext] =>
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Do you hear the resuscitation--
the mild beating of the will to love?
I’m sure that was far longer than 3 minutes and yet ...
oh yes - the brain was never deprived.

You’re smile was always so quiet
a breeze would have seemed thunderous
in comparison
I could melt into it so easily
(would you let me?)

Countless moments in shadowed wait
Never impetuous, always uncomplaining
Was it calculated? Did you feel it too?
Kindred, you and I

and here we are again ...

Yet still timorous, still unsure
Clarity is a singular gift
Rip open the wrapping; discover the treasure
you know is there
I promise I will not resist
I would be open even to just a kiss ...


≈ ≈ *** ≈ ≈

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 432 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Breezy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Resurrect

Contributed by Breezy on Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




≈ ≈ *** ≈ ≈


Do you hear the resuscitation--
the mild beating of the will to love?
I’m sure that was far longer than 3 minutes and yet ...
oh yes - the brain was never deprived.

You’re smile was always so quiet
a breeze would have seemed thunderous
in comparison
I could melt into it so easily
(would you let me?)

Countless moments in shadowed wait
Never impetuous, always uncomplaining
Was it calculated? Did you feel it too?
Kindred, you and I

and here we are again ...

Yet still timorous, still unsure
Clarity is a singular gift
Rip open the wrapping; discover the treasure
you know is there
I promise I will not resist
I would be open even to just a kiss ...


≈ ≈ *** ≈ ≈





Copyright © Breezy ... [ 2014-12-22 22:18:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 10:28:44 PM AEST
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He'd let you. I'd bet money on it and that's not what I have a lot of!

I like it, yes indeedy, me likes.

Side note: Pssst There's another word with my name in it. Don't tell Scorp. ;-)



Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 11:30:11 PM AEST
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Where have you been all my life chicky?Sure have missed you. Now as I have finished reading this Im awestruck once more and melting into a puddle:) Beautifullllllllllllll

hugs and love you and miss you too lots

Michelle


Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 04:21:13 AM AEST
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Melting into Love,
Excellent.


Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiny_Tina on Tuesday, 23rd December 2014 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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Soooo impressive!


Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
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Holy jackpot, Batman !!!!


Talk about a thunderous breeze... You little Miracle on 34th Street, you! Okay I am getting carried away, but how can I not? What an unexpected surprise to come to your account and see a *BRAND, SPANKING NEW* write from you!


This is a great write, and welcome back. I love your voice here, a touch of "speak softly and carry a big stick" a la Teddy Roosevelt. (P.s another Scorp). In other words, you packed a big punch in a most Breezalicious way. Your subtle, yet sultry wordplay is still on point, and I love the unwrapping of a gift comparison.

Oh, and TIMorous. Nice! ;)



~Scorp
(Thrilled to see you posting)



Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 27th December 2014 @ 11:46:27 PM AEST
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ooh sexy poetry, my favorite kind. This was lustful and mysterious. I loved every single line


Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 09:25:04 PM AEST
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truly beautiful! great to see you posting kiddo! happy holidays!

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Resurrect (User Rating: 1 )
by Jecks on Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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ahh there`s that HR I was talking about. Thjis represents what I remember best about you. I look forward to catching up on more!




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