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Array ( [sid] => 180092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cloud who caused an avalanche [time] => 2014-12-21 03:26:20 [hometext] => I seriously need to tidy up my closet:) [bodytext] => The catch all, clean it neat and tidy,
the Christmas season came.
Dig,dig, toss and throw
to get the decorations out.
(I'll fix the clothes and things back tomorrow"
Tomorrow came and went,
toss a few more things around,
shut the door,who is to know, right now just me,
tomorrow came and went again.

There is a cute little fellow, white with blue eyes,
who just could not resist temptation
when the door was open wide, just a second
before I could say another no,
it was much to late, a kitty leap,
a hit and miss, boom,bang,wham,
an avalanche he did create,
allover the floor, down on his head
a buried kitty, oh lord what a mess.

I find it a bit ironic, our other sweet furry boy,
the 18th marked a year now,since he passed away.
Miss him every second, every minute of the day
and we had given him the name of Avalanche
after my Colorado Hockey team.
But the name fit him well,
for everywhere he did go,
he caused a flurry of activity
and brought things down,boom,bang,wham,
like a mountain side of snow.
And yes inside this very closet
more than one occasion,
the same type of scene,
I guess it must be every kitties dream
(and my nightmare)

So I guess that is what I get,
for saying it will be taken care of tomorrow
and tomorrow kept on getting longer
but now there just is no way.
So guess what Ill be doing
all day tomorrow on my Sunday??

I keep listening for creaking
as I stare at the door.
I can almost swear I can hear the mess growing
just like before.
So if you do not hear from me
for a little while.
Call out search and rescue
Come to find me in the messy closet now!


Ha ha ha ha!



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The Cloud who caused an avalanche

Contributed by shelby on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 03:26:20 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



The catch all, clean it neat and tidy,
the Christmas season came.
Dig,dig, toss and throw
to get the decorations out.
(I'll fix the clothes and things back tomorrow"
Tomorrow came and went,
toss a few more things around,
shut the door,who is to know, right now just me,
tomorrow came and went again.

There is a cute little fellow, white with blue eyes,
who just could not resist temptation
when the door was open wide, just a second
before I could say another no,
it was much to late, a kitty leap,
a hit and miss, boom,bang,wham,
an avalanche he did create,
allover the floor, down on his head
a buried kitty, oh lord what a mess.

I find it a bit ironic, our other sweet furry boy,
the 18th marked a year now,since he passed away.
Miss him every second, every minute of the day
and we had given him the name of Avalanche
after my Colorado Hockey team.
But the name fit him well,
for everywhere he did go,
he caused a flurry of activity
and brought things down,boom,bang,wham,
like a mountain side of snow.
And yes inside this very closet
more than one occasion,
the same type of scene,
I guess it must be every kitties dream
(and my nightmare)

So I guess that is what I get,
for saying it will be taken care of tomorrow
and tomorrow kept on getting longer
but now there just is no way.
So guess what Ill be doing
all day tomorrow on my Sunday??

I keep listening for creaking
as I stare at the door.
I can almost swear I can hear the mess growing
just like before.
So if you do not hear from me
for a little while.
Call out search and rescue
Come to find me in the messy closet now!


Ha ha ha ha!







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Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 03:37:22 AM AEST
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thank you, I enjoyed reading this very much...

Peace!


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 05:12:03 AM AEST
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cute, funny and well written. Made me smile.
Nice.


Invierno


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 06:37:41 AM AEST
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Every Kitties dream lol
good stuff,
thanx for sharing.


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 06:14:07 PM AEST
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Heeheehee...too funny with a tiny little tear for the little guys.

I didn't know it's already been a year. I remember that, Michelle. In our hearts, they stay alive.

It has been about two and a half years since I had this little guy put down. Still miss him.

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Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Sunday, 21st December 2014 @ 06:36:12 PM AEST
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Ha I have that same closet! Thanks for the smile, it's been a trying day.
K


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 22nd December 2014 @ 05:59:54 AM AEST
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This was a really great interpretation of the season. Very well thought out and very cute. have a great holiday hopefully you have some snacks with you while you wait for rescue.


Re: The Cloud who caused an avalanche (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 29th December 2014 @ 08:53:51 PM AEST
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lol! this is a delight!

woofies, hugs n' love nessa




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