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NEW PARADISE
Contributed by
plasticherry
on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 10:33:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your kiss is a magic key
It unlocks a thousand locks inside of me
And the sky and the stars and even the moon
Can see that I'm already falling for you
A door to the new world
Come in and discover
How I rebuild the ruins
Left by my previous lover
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plasticherry
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2014-12-09 10:33:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: NEW PARADISE
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 9th December 2014 @ 08:28:42 PM AEST (User
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You have said so much in very few words! There is a lesson woven into the rhyme. My favorite line is "It unlocks a thousand locks inside of me." A very apt description of surrender to another.
More, please.
softereware
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Re: NEW PARADISE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waynster on
Wednesday, 10th December 2014 @ 09:12:20 AM AEST (User
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Wow, I just submitted a poem before I read this, how ironic that they are about the same thing. I love this! Keep on writing!
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