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Array ( [sid] => 179922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Freedom as a bunny [time] => 2014-12-02 11:01:26 [hometext] => Read this poem and you will feel like you're inside of it! [bodytext] => A Bunny as free as a butterfly,

Hopping this way and that,

Without a care in the world,

He flits here and there.

Chasing visions of carrots,

With lettuce all along the way.

He lives yet still another day,

Free to roam the grassy fields.

Seeking for prey,

The hunter's eyes searched the field

Until they settled on the lone rabbit,

That was sitting in the midst of the brush.

As the bunny looks up,

He senses a threat to his livelihood.

Scurrying along, he darts quickly

into the burrow and once again is safe. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pawaustin23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Freedom as a bunny

Contributed by pawaustin23 on Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 11:01:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A Bunny as free as a butterfly,

Hopping this way and that,

Without a care in the world,

He flits here and there.

Chasing visions of carrots,

With lettuce all along the way.

He lives yet still another day,

Free to roam the grassy fields.

Seeking for prey,

The hunter's eyes searched the field

Until they settled on the lone rabbit,

That was sitting in the midst of the brush.

As the bunny looks up,

He senses a threat to his livelihood.

Scurrying along, he darts quickly

into the burrow and once again is safe.

Copyright © pawaustin23 ... [ 2014-12-02 11:01:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Freedom as a bunny (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 05:21:50 PM AEST
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Your words paint a vivid picture and one can see the action as you read along. Very creative and enjoyable write, P

Re: Freedom as a bunny (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 01:57:00 AM AEST
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You wrote this in a way that you took me inside the verse. I am so happy the bunny hid and was safe too:) Nicely done.

Hug hug
Michelle

Re: Freedom as a bunny (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 12:09:13 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, this is beautiful, i'm happy he
made it to safety!

hugs n' love nessa

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