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Array ( [sid] => 179919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => open eyes [time] => 2014-12-02 04:30:32 [hometext] => inspired by poetry of women whom dare to love and be loved [bodytext] => Cast not the net of disbelief feel what's hidden inside tell nothing but speak in volumes of silent screams this is no prince In every sense but those whom do this hide horror scares formed in broken promises of love spoken true in meeting bound by melding heartbeats In rhythmic succession when joined as one. The enemy curvy hips moist colored painted lips false sway and swagging hips with humps that fill jeans like water balloons most men flawed by wondering eyes believing newer Is better.

Oust by lust and lost what was once given her heart you take and forsake by trickery defend them I don't for fools love Is like fake gold shiny outside but false In the middle. Women move like chess pieces never knowing their next move but swift when the do home not the same affairs like secrets kept dormant slumber eternal needs not met else where they look.

though shallow in person once revealed by dropped guards Caught in lies thick as mountains if true to self the home your heart should have stayed but make me not the man you want but except that I am yours flawed are your perception too something where there's nothing to hide but insecurity you thrust upon me with mistrust from the one broken by the last.

If only you knew sometimes true is good so hold on tight your in for a fight but beware of those without always have advice,
In truth the question how much are you worth emotionally unanswered that pause you just had makes you ponder the choices in who has your heart as you read on as for me I don't know all but this if you read any of my romantic poetry then it's her I write about.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => SPOKENWORDARTIST [notes] => Edited per request ~ Moderator_18 Dec 2, 2014 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
open eyes

Contributed by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 04:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Cast not the net of disbelief feel what's hidden inside tell nothing but speak in volumes of silent screams this is no prince In every sense but those whom do this hide horror scares formed in broken promises of love spoken true in meeting bound by melding heartbeats In rhythmic succession when joined as one. The enemy curvy hips moist colored painted lips false sway and swagging hips with humps that fill jeans like water balloons most men flawed by wondering eyes believing newer Is better.

Oust by lust and lost what was once given her heart you take and forsake by trickery defend them I don't for fools love Is like fake gold shiny outside but false In the middle. Women move like chess pieces never knowing their next move but swift when the do home not the same affairs like secrets kept dormant slumber eternal needs not met else where they look.

though shallow in person once revealed by dropped guards Caught in lies thick as mountains if true to self the home your heart should have stayed but make me not the man you want but except that I am yours flawed are your perception too something where there's nothing to hide but insecurity you thrust upon me with mistrust from the one broken by the last.

If only you knew sometimes true is good so hold on tight your in for a fight but beware of those without always have advice,
In truth the question how much are you worth emotionally unanswered that pause you just had makes you ponder the choices in who has your heart as you read on as for me I don't know all but this if you read any of my romantic poetry then it's her I write about.





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Re: open eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 02:02:52 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh, this is incredible, power in the word here!

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Re: open eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 02:31:28 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Powerful imagery.
K




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