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With only shared language,
Thoughts and emotions.
Mingle in mystique
And it's a fire of elusive desire.
Frustrated years
Turning to bloom into new musings.
Because of new inspiration,
She is a new exhilaration.
Can I annihilate my inhibitions,
Without half-hearted reservations.
Reserving my inclinations for another time,
I fear would be a mistake.
Let passion take over
Where once I was weak
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New Paths

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 06:44:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Can you love someone you have never met but admire?
With only shared language,
Thoughts and emotions.
Mingle in mystique
And it's a fire of elusive desire.
Frustrated years
Turning to bloom into new musings.
Because of new inspiration,
She is a new exhilaration.
Can I annihilate my inhibitions,
Without half-hearted reservations.
Reserving my inclinations for another time,
I fear would be a mistake.
Let passion take over
Where once I was weak

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2014-12-01 06:44:22]
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Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 10:14:32 AM AEST
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You really are onto some new musings these days...I think a fresh approach to anything is never a bad idea. It helps us grow, it keeps our enemies guessing, it makes life livelier...As for the question in the beginning, it seems to be a common pondering around here, lol. We are sensitive creatures who get moved by other, similar creatures. Words are powerful, as you recently stated. I suppose that is for you and your respective parties to figure out, but a little inspiration never hurt anyone.

~Scorp

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 01:34:22 PM AEST
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Can you love someone you have never met but admire?

Yes, I believe we can.

Many questions here aimed at oneself. I say read those last two lines and go for it!

Nicely done,

Tim

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 04:33:37 PM AEST
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To say that I like your style is an understatement. You have a very evocative poem here. This reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Alicia Keyes

". . .Continuous mistakes I known I've made before. How long will I feel so out of place. . ."

Excerpt from 'Troubles' By Alicia Keyes

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 1st December 2014 @ 05:28:14 PM AEST
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inspiring... like taking the leap hoping you'll land on your
feet! ...sometimes we just simply have to follow our hearts,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 12:43:00 PM AEST
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nicely done. There is no mistaking what message you are sending . The resader roots for you and wishes you luck in love .

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 2nd December 2014 @ 08:48:41 PM AEST
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Good question! Whether or not, your musings are insightful and empowering. Giving yourself permission to follow passion instead of propriety.
You write with passion; why not live with it as well?
You will have great stories to tell.

Re: New Paths (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 07:32:11 AM AEST
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"Reserving my inclinations for another time,
I fear would be a mistake.
Let passion take over
Where once I was weak"

If your actions do no harm to others, then heck YES! Go for it!

I like your poem friend DR

Invierno

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