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Array ( [sid] => 179806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All Aboard [time] => 2014-11-26 13:01:37 [hometext] => Decisions, decisions. [bodytext] => It's precarious,
On the edge.
The edge of all-in, or abandon ship
Lay the cards down and fold, or let 'er rip

I am not equipped.
Life jacket
Preserved for the deserved, that can stack it
I am in the crosshairs of your bracket

No-limit, shipmate
Or, shipwreck.
Is it a royal flush, or hit the deck?
Capsized in your wake; or should I just check. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 408 [topic] => 21 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

All Aboard

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 01:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It's precarious,
On the edge.
The edge of all-in, or abandon ship
Lay the cards down and fold, or let 'er rip

I am not equipped.
Life jacket
Preserved for the deserved, that can stack it
I am in the crosshairs of your bracket

No-limit, shipmate
Or, shipwreck.
Is it a royal flush, or hit the deck?
Capsized in your wake; or should I just check.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2014-11-26 13:01:37]
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Re: All Aboard (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 03:52:23 PM AEST
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And I am in the crosshairs of your poetry.
Heck, #### your pants, dive in, and swim.
Such a cool, rich read.

Best,

FOX

Re: All Aboard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 08:58:39 PM AEST
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I shall quote a wonderful friend of ours:

Take care of you.

I really like these analogies. Another Scorperrific poem!!!

TIMbomb

Re: All Aboard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 09:20:37 PM AEST
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Came back to read again and realized I forgetted to say I really liked this little bit here:

Preserved for the deserved, that can stack it

Re: All Aboard (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 07:24:31 AM AEST
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"Capsized in your wake"

Good poem. I like the line above and enjoyed the overall content and direction.

Invierno

Re: All Aboard (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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I cannot express to you the immense joy I felt from reading this. I smiled the whole way through, like an idiot. I always like your poems where each stanza has its own mini theme and the whole poem is based on one main theme. you are a great poet!

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