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A jarring roller coaster,
While more carnage scatters
Scarring, your lone survivor

Repulsed, the earth shatters
Convulsed by your pit of need
Deceptive voice patters,
Forcing absolute control

The wind protests in chatters-
Melodic eulogies
Leaving my heart in tatters;
Demonic apathy.
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Disregard

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 10:13:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Your type of love batters
A jarring roller coaster,
While more carnage scatters
Scarring, your lone survivor

Repulsed, the earth shatters
Convulsed by your pit of need
Deceptive voice patters,
Forcing absolute control

The wind protests in chatters-
Melodic eulogies
Leaving my heart in tatters;
Demonic apathy.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2014-11-22 22:13:15]
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Re: Disregard (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 10:20:22 PM AEST
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well, this is my mood tonight exactly, this is exquisite!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Disregard (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 11:32:50 PM AEST
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Dat last stanza tho!!! Girl this is a great little poem. concise and biting.

....Demonic Apathy

What a line!

Re: Disregard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 11:47:02 PM AEST
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See, now with that last line, I see a bunch of demons just sitting around, ho humming, yeah, yeah, "We gonna destroy the world today?" Another says, "Pfft, I don't care, whatev." The other says, "yeah, me too." So, hey we get to live another day and Angel & Buffy can rest this one out.

Seriously though. What's stupid? I'm thinking I no wanna have an angry Scorpenator after me. No way, un-uh. This bites and the rhyme scheme was pretty cool too.

I especially like:

Deceptive voice patters,
Forcing absolute control

It's like a more polite way of thinking you heya liar!!!! And then not losing it.

I love the bite of Scorperiffic poetry!

Re: Disregard (User Rating: 1 )
by sanders on Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 12:03:48 AM AEST
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Oh tell me Scorp...
How do you write in just a few words
A whole world of poetry
Such mastering over the pen
That can kill any demon like a sword ;)

Re: Disregard (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 09:37:51 AM AEST
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convulsed by your pit of need....
hmm that line grabs me
and spins me,
Excellent.....

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