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Join together, make a pact
To rid the world of painful light
'Turn to dark, not to bright'

March along the fallen graves
Of the ones never saved
Arise young shadows far and near
At pale light we shall jeer

Forget your sins, join us now
Why you ask, what, how?
By killing out the light within
We shall rid of people's sins

First this god forbidden place
Then the world we shall face
Spread out, but don't reveal
Boast of the lives that you steal

But although we're hated for our views
Little not, we're more than a few
Come boys, men, women, girls
Help us make an extremist world...

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Extremist world calls

Contributed by thepoet353897 on Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 02:14:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A silhouette of colours black
Join together, make a pact
To rid the world of painful light
'Turn to dark, not to bright'

March along the fallen graves
Of the ones never saved
Arise young shadows far and near
At pale light we shall jeer

Forget your sins, join us now
Why you ask, what, how?
By killing out the light within
We shall rid of people's sins

First this god forbidden place
Then the world we shall face
Spread out, but don't reveal
Boast of the lives that you steal

But although we're hated for our views
Little not, we're more than a few
Come boys, men, women, girls
Help us make an extremist world...

Copyright © thepoet353897 ... [ 2014-11-21 14:14:03]
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Re: Extremist world calls (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 08:25:41 PM AEST
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i like how you laid this out, very interesting, with beautiful flow,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Extremist world calls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 11:24:49 PM AEST
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I think we are reminded of the extremist world
So much these days that we wonder
about the glue as if it has become brittle
and toxic and things are all falling apart
and we just accept lie after lie that is constantly being repeated
And not much makes sense
And then a voucher to go to a private school
And then the private school doesn't have to
Take certain kids in
And we hate the evil poor lady on the street
Who has half lost her mind
She must be bad bad bad
Nobody can save her she's already dead
So kick her into the gutter to clean up
The street

Make the extremist dream become complete.

I really like this because it seeps in and
and boldly cements the changing tide

It's very concrete... excellent write!

Peace!

Re: Extremist world calls (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 12:23:38 AM AEST
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Intersting Indeed.....

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