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Array ( [sid] => 17974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ti Chiedo [time] => 2003-05-21 15:15:00 [hometext] => Another offering from your local poetry hack.
Feel free to enjoy and air whatever you wish to comment or gripe about [bodytext] => Quando ho sentito musica cara
Io sento un peso nel seno mio,
Ma l’alma mia così leggera,
Quasi vuole giungere al Paradiso!
Cara, ti chedo-che cosa
È questa nuova sensazione
Che il mio corpo non sa;
Che ora mi strugge?

Quando ho leggeto un poema bravo,
Io sento cuore mio trema, testa mia mi manca
E quesata emozione immensa guinge dal cavo
Del’apertura in me.
Oh, la mia bocca-ha mancato,
In questa la tua braccia-lucente,
Come un’altra stella, che mi ha abbagliato
Un’altro sole, iluminoso più che oro...

Quando sei vicina, vicina a me
Quando mi prendi, agli seni tuoi, fragrante:
Mi sento, che io sia nel’allarme
E nel estati in lo stesso tempo!...

....è l’amore, questi pensieri;
Che di te ebbi, che ho e avrò?
Cosa poter fu in tuoi sussuri,
Che mi ha in tua potenza? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Good_King_Bragi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => italian [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Ti Chiedo

Contributed by Good_King_Bragi on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 03:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Quando ho sentito musica cara
Io sento un peso nel seno mio,
Ma l’alma mia così leggera,
Quasi vuole giungere al Paradiso!
Cara, ti chedo-che cosa
È questa nuova sensazione
Che il mio corpo non sa;
Che ora mi strugge?

Quando ho leggeto un poema bravo,
Io sento cuore mio trema, testa mia mi manca
E quesata emozione immensa guinge dal cavo
Del’apertura in me.
Oh, la mia bocca-ha mancato,
In questa la tua braccia-lucente,
Come un’altra stella, che mi ha abbagliato
Un’altro sole, iluminoso più che oro...

Quando sei vicina, vicina a me
Quando mi prendi, agli seni tuoi, fragrante:
Mi sento, che io sia nel’allarme
E nel estati in lo stesso tempo!...

....è l’amore, questi pensieri;
Che di te ebbi, che ho e avrò?
Cosa poter fu in tuoi sussuri,
Che mi ha in tua potenza?

Copyright Â© Good_King_Bragi ... [ 2003-05-21 15:15:00]
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Re: Ti Chiedo (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 11:25:46 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful Good_King! :)...
Great Write!

Here -- I'll translate it so people won't trash it:

***
I Wonder

When I have heard music, my dear
I feel a weight in my bosom
But my soul is so light
It almost wants to arrive to paradise!
My dear, I wonder -

What is this new feeling
That my body does not know;
That now consumes me?

When I have read a good poem,
My heart trembles,
My head I am lacking
And this immense emotion arrives
From the hollow opening in me
My mouth -- it is lacking
In these your arms--shining,
Like another star, that dazzled me
Another sun, more illuminous than gold..

When you are close, close to me
When you take me into your fragrant bosom, I feel that I am alarmed
And in summer at the same time!...

And the love, these thoughts;
That you have
That I have and will have
What can I do?
Your sussuri (smiles?)
Have me in your power
***

Re: Ti Chiedo (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 10:49:27 PM AEST
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WARNING! SPELLING ERRORS!
I realised I made the following typos:

Quando sei vicina, vicina a me
Quando mi prendi, agli seni tuoi, fragrante:
Mi sento, che io sia nel’allarme
E nel estaSi in lo stesso tempo!...

....è l’amore, questi pensieri;
Che di te ebbi, che ho e avrò?
Cosa poter fu in tuoi sussurO,
Che mi ha in tua potenza?

The mistakes and the confusion caused are deeply regretted.

Re: Ti Chiedo (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:44:50 PM AEST
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sorry I didn't catch those.... :) still a beautiful write.

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