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Walks to school alone
She must be 5 or 6 they say
And violence must be prone
She walks into class
With a sad little frown
And hopes to god
That no one looks down
The hem of her dress Is torn to shreds
While everyone else Has brand new keds
The sad little girl
Has lost her fight
For she just went through,
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Little Girl

Contributed by FireStarter on Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 05:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

A little girl with broken shoes
Walks to school alone
She must be 5 or 6 they say
And violence must be prone
She walks into class
With a sad little frown
And hopes to god
That no one looks down
The hem of her dress Is torn to shreds
While everyone else Has brand new keds
The sad little girl
Has lost her fight
For she just went through,
her darkest night

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2014-11-13 17:50:52]
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Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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It's tough to hear of kids living with pain. But at the same time, it draws me to them. A touching write.

Fox

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 03:06:12 AM AEST
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A very sad write. This poem evokes emotion. Nicely done.

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Tim

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 11:08:31 AM AEST
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heart breaking and heartwrenching write...............

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 05:25:20 AM AEST
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Very sad and a very sad comment on our society. Where the biggest problems we have is trying to fit in. There are real troubles and most of them are outside of our selves. No one should go without being loved though

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 09:28:42 AM AEST
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Wow. Chilling . Great job illiciting real feelings in the reader . I wonder what the impetus was for you to write this ? Really good job here.

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST
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Good stuff here, Fire.

I like the way it lends to a sequel.

Invierno

Re: Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 04:34:52 AM AEST
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Sad but very meaningful.
Another great write.

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