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Smiling in infinities, dealing in darts
My heart's blood pumping wildly, splashing his arms
His tongue twisting lies, and eyes, with snake-like charms

Demand. Incessant, like a baby's rattle
I'm headed to the slaughterhouse, like cattle
Formerly, the sanctity of my bedroom
But it has become the common sense vacuum

Where coming together means falling apart
When seeds get scattered, right before we depart
Leaving, walking out with my heart on your sleeve
You came here not to steal, but also to thieve.
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Smuggled Goods

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 07:11:58 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A late night pilfering by the Thief of Hearts
Smiling in infinities, dealing in darts
My heart's blood pumping wildly, splashing his arms
His tongue twisting lies, and eyes, with snake-like charms

Demand. Incessant, like a baby's rattle
I'm headed to the slaughterhouse, like cattle
Formerly, the sanctity of my bedroom
But it has become the common sense vacuum

Where coming together means falling apart
When seeds get scattered, right before we depart
Leaving, walking out with my heart on your sleeve
You came here not to steal, but also to thieve.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2014-11-11 07:11:58]
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Re: Smuggled Goods (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 09:21:31 AM AEST
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Hi there

WoW deep descriptive and to the point. Full of emotion. I feel you my friend I went down that same road not ones not twice but thrice. Its hard but you will come out on top. God bless. Grate write.

Greetings
Rus

Re: Smuggled Goods (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 01:39:31 PM AEST
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Take that heart back and put it on your own sleeve!!!

Such a sad write (right?) with that Scorperrific flare!!! I just love the way you use metaphors!

You have been on a writing spree and that's good for us YPDCers.

TIMraider

Re: Smuggled Goods (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 02:52:40 PM AEST
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i know this is sad and serious tho i had to laugh at
these lines as they are all too familiar and true::

Formerly, the sanctity of my bedroom
But it has become the common sense vacuum

beautiful, vivid imagery, your talent shines!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Smuggled Goods (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 11:23:40 PM AEST
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Demand. Incessant, like a baby's rattle
I'm headed to the slaughterhouse, like cattle
Formerly, the sanctity of my bedroom
But it has become the common sense vacuum

a common sense vacuum, really witty. I remember when I was free to make such mistakes. I thought I was such a lover, but I was really just a selfish boy, but now though.....mmmm. I am much better, lol. Why is youth wasted on the young?

Re: Smuggled Goods (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Monday, 2nd January 2017 @ 05:34:32 PM AEST
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I know I/'/m supposed to be sad but this made me smile because of the smarts behind it and how clever it was. Clever is good and you have it in your lines. A writer I enjoy reading

duff

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