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Array ( [sid] => 17964 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => dear daddy [time] => 2003-05-22 12:05:00 [hometext] => my life has a long history most of it isn't good so i write poems to ease my pain. [bodytext] => dear daddy
why do we go to court?
dear daddy
what have we ever done to make god so upset with us?
your only father drives you to drink till your hearts content
he beat you as a babe
'till innocent tears ran down your cheeks
dear daddy
what have i ever done to make you so angry with me?
dear daddy
why do you hurt me so?
these lawyers, they control your every move
dear daddy
do we deserve to live like this? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 32 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

dear daddy

Contributed by gery_giggles on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

dear daddy
why do we go to court?
dear daddy
what have we ever done to make god so upset with us?
your only father drives you to drink till your hearts content
he beat you as a babe
'till innocent tears ran down your cheeks
dear daddy
what have i ever done to make you so angry with me?
dear daddy
why do you hurt me so?
these lawyers, they control your every move
dear daddy
do we deserve to live like this?

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Re: dear daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by renee on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 10:14:49 PM AEST
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THIS IS VERY SAD TO READ BUT GOOD THE MORE I READ THESE POEMS I KNOW HOW LUCKY I AM TO HAVE A GOOD FATHER I HOPE EVERY THING WORKS OUT FOR YOU KEEP WRITING YOUR GOOD AND IT WILL HELP YOUR PAIN.RENEE

Re: dear daddy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 03:56:21 PM AEST
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I really like this poem, i hope that really is not true it sucks; I guess!!
You kinda said dear dadddy too much!!

Re: dear daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by fluffy on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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lucky to have a daddy,
i dont have one,
i usually i think is he a baddy,
but im not to sure if he is one,
hope 2 see him one day,
thats why you r lucky to have a daddy,
very good poem i am very impressed u have a dad to ask whats going on and some1 who is by your side

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