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Array ( [sid] => 179492 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MISS FORTUNE [time] => 2014-10-20 21:06:03 [hometext] => Out of all the poems i`ve written...this i am most proud of. [bodytext] => You are the rise and fall of every sun and moon
You see things in a different spectrum of light
Violet beams ultra-Violet in the lightning noon
My bleeding heart is a powerful sight.

Iris, Your hidden message tripped me and I fell
Cleverly disguised reflection walking on water
Hovering `E`motionaly in the dell,
Your fleeting glimpse sees things others don`t
And your peripheral vision on your non-dominant side explores faces others wont.

Sweet Pea, My truest and purest flame
you`ll be gone along time, but to me
you will forever remain the same
It was fun while it lasted
Loved you for all it was worth
But the world was not ready for you
And you came crashing back down to earth.

Llly, Your ripple effect sent shockwaves through town
And 2 princes did look upon you, To beautify his crown
Always in the right place at the right time
Teasing us commoners like an expensive jug of wine
Now that you`ve made history
You whisper to me "I prefer to remain a mystery"

Oh Ruby, This feels right!
Staring me in the face all this time
Everything points to you
I feel myself choking
"As 'Well' As" the feeling I`m floating
Calling me to follow,
There is just something about you
And I don`t know what it is,
Perhaps the tide is turning?
Oh my heart, some how, You fixed it
And I discovered a side of me... I never knew existed [comments] => 1 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 22 [informant] => shanat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
MISS FORTUNE

Contributed by shanat on Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 09:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You are the rise and fall of every sun and moon
You see things in a different spectrum of light
Violet beams ultra-Violet in the lightning noon
My bleeding heart is a powerful sight.

Iris, Your hidden message tripped me and I fell
Cleverly disguised reflection walking on water
Hovering `E`motionaly in the dell,
Your fleeting glimpse sees things others don`t
And your peripheral vision on your non-dominant side explores faces others wont.

Sweet Pea, My truest and purest flame
you`ll be gone along time, but to me
you will forever remain the same
It was fun while it lasted
Loved you for all it was worth
But the world was not ready for you
And you came crashing back down to earth.

Llly, Your ripple effect sent shockwaves through town
And 2 princes did look upon you, To beautify his crown
Always in the right place at the right time
Teasing us commoners like an expensive jug of wine
Now that you`ve made history
You whisper to me "I prefer to remain a mystery"

Oh Ruby, This feels right!
Staring me in the face all this time
Everything points to you
I feel myself choking
"As 'Well' As" the feeling I`m floating
Calling me to follow,
There is just something about you
And I don`t know what it is,
Perhaps the tide is turning?
Oh my heart, some how, You fixed it
And I discovered a side of me... I never knew existed




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Re: MISS FORTUNE (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Tuesday, 21st October 2014 @ 12:44:09 PM AEST
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That was a very beautiful and strong poem.
Thank you so much for sharing.
-T_U




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