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My body lay corrupted
Stimulations erupted

Once flaccid, now erected
Urgent need is connected
Deliciously assaulted

Two bodies now collided
Master foreplay applauded
Now you have been evicted.

Peace!

**Author's note: shoutout to ypdc'er Muppetman, whose traditional sign off; 'Peace!' seemed like a befitting end to this tongue-in-cheek poem. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 420 [topic] => 24 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Why the Frown?

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 01:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

An orgasm abducted
My body lay corrupted
Stimulations erupted

Once flaccid, now erected
Urgent need is connected
Deliciously assaulted

Two bodies now collided
Master foreplay applauded
Now you have been evicted.

Peace!

**Author's note: shoutout to ypdc'er Muppetman, whose traditional sign off; 'Peace!' seemed like a befitting end to this tongue-in-cheek poem.

Copyright Â© hauntedscorp ... [ 2014-10-20 13:05:45]
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Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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cool stuff. Good job and sparse of words...refreshing. Kudos to MM!

Invierno

Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 02:41:40 PM AEST
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Love 'em and leave 'em. I want someone I can just make go home every night. Think I'll ever find one? Na, me either.

"No, you can't leave me like this!" said the individual this was directed at!

Nice not so nice. I love the Scorperrific poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TIMi Hendrix

Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 10:33:23 PM AEST
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Tongue in cheek indeed Scorp! A "just the facts m'am" Dragnet approach?
My girlfriend's mantra comes to mind..
"I want a man in my life; not in my house!"
Sex is like a meal…all preparation, and setting the table..and over in a flash, with a bit of a mess left over! Ha. Ha.
Well done! (or was it medium rare?)
softerware

Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 22nd October 2014 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST
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Not my style as a man. None the less well written and F...... Hilarious whahahahahahahahahahaha

Greetings
Rus

Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 05:11:35 AM AEST
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...and sentences, contracted!

if only no fuss meant no muss. Just spitballing, but the last stanza could have described the cosmological tilting of the proto-earth and the formation of the moon.

and 'did the earth move for you?' shows all far-fetched references are relevant to this enjoyable, utilitarian concoction. Thanks, Scorp!
S.

Re: Why the Frown? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 12:09:36 PM AEST
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your mind is priceless as is this poem!

hugs n' love nessa

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