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Array ( [sid] => 179425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Breaking The Supreme Law: [time] => 2014-10-09 21:45:46 [hometext] => We got to remember what our strength is an stick to it no matter what. [bodytext] => Ever wonder why our society is in such disarray.
Its because we keep breaking the supreme laws
that strengthen our faith.
We lie,steal ,kill and fornacate .
Thinking its our right to behave this way.
Committing adultery is normal many of you say.
We are only human when we act this way.
But i came to correct you today.
We are more than just flesh and blood.
Spirit ,soul and body is what we are ok. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 19 [informant] => richard_campbell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Breaking The Supreme Law:

Contributed by richard_campbell on Thursday, 9th October 2014 @ 09:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Ever wonder why our society is in such disarray.
Its because we keep breaking the supreme laws
that strengthen our faith.
We lie,steal ,kill and fornacate .
Thinking its our right to behave this way.
Committing adultery is normal many of you say.
We are only human when we act this way.
But i came to correct you today.
We are more than just flesh and blood.
Spirit ,soul and body is what we are ok.

Copyright © richard_campbell ... [ 2014-10-09 21:45:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Breaking The Supreme Law: (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 10th October 2014 @ 05:28:29 AM AEST
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Hi there

Yes we are quite arrogant. We think we can do what we want and God must just forgive. Mankind will pay the price. Good write to the point. No if's and's or but's. God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: Breaking The Supreme Law: (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 09:24:44 PM AEST
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so there is no supreme law
that bombs innocent children

indulgent quest
is not the worst
nor the best

ignorance of the other
or thinking there is
this supremacy
misses the point

when people have the
tools to learn
and they can be
delivered from poverty
and self doubt
when people can live
free and understand
that we are all
very much tied together
in all that we do

then, foolish things
that people do
that in the end only
hurt them
and nobody else

will be reduced

believe in people
and community

I think the bible is rubbish
if it is misinterpreted

And those who wrote it
are no better than those
who do not know
what love is all
about

Peace!

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