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Array ( [sid] => 17929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Wonder [time] => 2003-05-21 23:35:00 [hometext] => This is another poem on just how I feel all the time. [bodytext] => I wonder how it would feel,
to be not me.
I wonder how it would feel,
just to be free.
I look in the mirror,
to see whats on the other side.
Maybe happiness,
Maybe pride.
I wish I could be you,
and you could be me.
To feel what I feel,
To see what I see.
But noone could be me.
Noone would try.
But I want them to feel what I feel.
Cry what I cry.
So won't you please,
enter my life.
See how it is,
See what it's like. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 32 [informant] => avemaria [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I Wonder

Contributed by avemaria on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wonder how it would feel,
to be not me.
I wonder how it would feel,
just to be free.
I look in the mirror,
to see whats on the other side.
Maybe happiness,
Maybe pride.
I wish I could be you,
and you could be me.
To feel what I feel,
To see what I see.
But noone could be me.
Noone would try.
But I want them to feel what I feel.
Cry what I cry.
So won't you please,
enter my life.
See how it is,
See what it's like.

Copyright © avemaria ... [ 2003-05-21 23:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 05:31:43 AM AEST
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Ah yes.... we all wish for others to understand how we are feeling but, in truth, there is no way they ever can unless they have been there themsleves.

Great poem. I am sure a lot of people will be able to relate to it.

sleepless_siren

Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 06:31:09 AM AEST
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I think I see a little bit of me in this. Great write! Blessed be,

~ Moonlit

Re: I Wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:22:44 PM AEST
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Making people understand the feelings we have inside seems to be the hardest thing we can do. Especially if no one is listening, or no one seems to care. I can relate to this poem, it says so much concerning my present situation...makes me think. Keep writing, this is a great poem, and a good way to express yourself!!!
Christopher

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