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I know who you are
Easy
Freely
You give your body
Away
To anyone
At anytime
You call yourself free
I call you used

Have you ever
Taken a minute
To think about
Your future
Your family
Your children

I thought not
Just worked at the moment
Just what got you off
What gets you going
Makes you moan
Scream
Now the sheets
Need cleaning

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Your wasting my miserable life

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 10:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

No matter what you say
I know who you are
Easy
Freely
You give your body
Away
To anyone
At anytime
You call yourself free
I call you used

Have you ever
Taken a minute
To think about
Your future
Your family
Your children

I thought not
Just worked at the moment
Just what got you off
What gets you going
Makes you moan
Scream
Now the sheets
Need cleaning

----
--

Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2014-09-13 22:00:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your wasting my miserable life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 10:54:17 PM AEST
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wow, this one makes me think it's about me
In my fifties and a hetero male

But I wasn't that lucky
"Scratched my head and
made myself a bet,
There's all these things I don't
remember, how lucky can one guy
get" I think it goes - John Prine

I lament too much when I forget to live
too big, has nothing to do with better
or worse, magnifying wasted time
forgetting how to count...

I like to become really small

Lot to think about here.
I think that makes it a great poem -
Hell a lot people read it

Peace!

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