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Array ( [sid] => 179211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Last Shot [time] => 2014-09-02 15:31:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => They were never ment to be lovers,
but one could never stop loving
the other. They saw thier love's destruction
and alway's tried to deny thier love.

I guess you're the only one that had
success, you were always the first to it.

The first to love,
the first to stop,
even to the grave.

Yet I still feel your presance here,
always taking me to where we met.
When I flick through our conversations
I still look for your hidden message,
always in plain veiw but always in the shadows,
in the middle of the road yet always round the corner.

P.S. I've never stopped loving you

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One Last Shot

Contributed by mick on Tuesday, 2nd September 2014 @ 03:31:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

They were never ment to be lovers,
but one could never stop loving
the other. They saw thier love's destruction
and alway's tried to deny thier love.

I guess you're the only one that had
success, you were always the first to it.

The first to love,
the first to stop,
even to the grave.

Yet I still feel your presance here,
always taking me to where we met.
When I flick through our conversations
I still look for your hidden message,
always in plain veiw but always in the shadows,
in the middle of the road yet always round the corner.

P.S. I've never stopped loving you

Copyright © mick ... [ 2014-09-02 15:31:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One Last Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Tuesday, 2nd September 2014 @ 04:40:25 PM AEST
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"even to the grave." VERY powerful

Invierno

Re: One Last Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 3rd September 2014 @ 02:42:18 AM AEST
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A deep piece, I enjoyed the read

The Phantom

Re: One Last Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 5th September 2014 @ 03:57:32 AM AEST
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Hi Mick

Haven't read something from you in a while. Not that you haven't posted. Yes this is a very powerful piece. To still love after someone has left in any form or fashion I think is us humans down fall because we can't move on. Again great write. Blessing

Greetings
Rus

Re: One Last Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 5th September 2014 @ 06:59:04 AM AEST
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read again Mick. this is truly a gifted poem.

Invierno

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