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Every emotion is passing through your body to mine...

The feeling of missing you with all of my heart but I stay silent!

I see you but I look the other way
Screaming inside but no words are coming out!

Knowing that you will never ruin my happiness!
You left because of what somebody told you to do
And that is just sad!

You put all of your insecurities on me and didn't even make things better for you

You worried yourself sick but no matter what I was still there!

You neglect the fact that through everything I was still there no matter how bad it got with us!

I can definitely say I did all I could!

I tried so hard to make you see but you stayed so blind and held everything over my head!

I'm sorry but I can't do this anymore..take care! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => FindingMyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Emotion

Contributed by FindingMyself on Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 07:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sitting across from you feeling the tension
Every emotion is passing through your body to mine...

The feeling of missing you with all of my heart but I stay silent!

I see you but I look the other way
Screaming inside but no words are coming out!

Knowing that you will never ruin my happiness!
You left because of what somebody told you to do
And that is just sad!

You put all of your insecurities on me and didn't even make things better for you

You worried yourself sick but no matter what I was still there!

You neglect the fact that through everything I was still there no matter how bad it got with us!

I can definitely say I did all I could!

I tried so hard to make you see but you stayed so blind and held everything over my head!

I'm sorry but I can't do this anymore..take care!

Copyright © FindingMyself ... [ 2014-08-26 19:49:09]
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Re: Emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by Geneva1223 on Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 11:37:58 PM AEST
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wow great poem, sad to say alot of us go through this... we love so hard but when that love is broken when you finally run into them you want to kiss and smack them at the same time because they let a good thing go for something stupid so it's bitter sweet. beautiful poem to me it told a story that alot of us can relate to great job

Re: Emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 06:15:36 PM AEST
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Well it certainly cannot be said that you didn't pour your emotions out in this.
I can feel the pain, the anguish and the turmoil within, but you have managed to flow it out onto the page.
Well done.

Steve

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