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At waters edge tears reside
honey due moon drip sip upon ripples upon tide
languished lengthening of longing pangs the pride
cold flaming tongues and lips ripped apart
toes test the water to baptise the heart
the two stand together igniting the spark
one upon water the other on land
serpentine forged silver sword
silver trembling hands.

bride and groom
sun and moon
ring of fire
wedding band

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lady of the silver lake

Contributed by alicewhite on Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 03:15:50 AM in AEST
Topic: surreal

At waters edge tears reside
honey due moon drip sip upon ripples upon tide
languished lengthening of longing pangs the pride
cold flaming tongues and lips ripped apart
toes test the water to baptise the heart
the two stand together igniting the spark
one upon water the other on land
serpentine forged silver sword
silver trembling hands.

bride and groom
sun and moon
ring of fire
wedding band

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2014-08-26 03:15:50]
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Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorisanne on Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 11:01:25 AM AEST
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A very nice poem of the event at the lake.Thanks!

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by sanders on Wednesday, 27th August 2014 @ 10:42:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful write indeed...

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 28th August 2014 @ 06:27:06 AM AEST
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I Love these lines. Very well done.

"honey due moon drip sip upon ripples upon tide
languished lengthening of longing pangs the pride"

Invierno

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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very beautiful poem! I love it!
I know it's personal, I know of a lake
named Silver Lake.
Peace and calmness it is surrounded by
the stars at night, no roads or houses nearby.
It sings of a beginning perhaps of the two
who pasted by, like it was where they perhaps came together for the first time.

It's a very beautiful poem indeed! I think all beautiful places should have always a Lady's name. Best always AW!

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by houseofleaves on Sunday, 31st August 2014 @ 01:21:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful!

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 8th September 2014 @ 09:31:30 AM AEST
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I like the last verse, very deep
when I read poems like this, good poems good reads it makes me wish I come here and read more often, Thanks for sharing great write
hope to read more soon
-Voice

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 05:14:41 AM AEST
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beautiful and exquisite!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 06:33:32 PM AEST
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Loved the soothing nature of this.
DIdn't need a profileration of wasted words to make a point.
Well done.

Steve

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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Poetically spirited in every way- stunning attention to language nuances. Happy to venture back to your account page and see poetry of this caliber. Great job!

~Scorp

Re: lady of the silver lake (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 12:41:52 AM AEST
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reminds me of some of the great medieval literature about Arthur and Camelot. well done.

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