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Array ( [sid] => 179113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fell [time] => 2014-08-18 12:20:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fell into a dark hole
Fell from the building of something new.

She tries to repair herself but every obstacle is stopping her.
She feels like these are never ending trials and tribulations

He is moving on so quick!
She knows she can''t go to you for anything anymore.
She bleeds of love for you with her flesh and soul!

Pushing past all of the pain and tears
And trying to end her day with nothing but positive thoughts and a smile.

Finding the comfort in God,writing,playing soccer and dancing just doesn''t seem like it is enough.
Constantly searching for peace, she is still falling!

She isn''t giving up!

Starting to realize the only man she is good enough for is God.
Wishing she was good enough for the man of her dreams.

The past year consisted of many mistakes but somewhat finding the women she is suppose to be.
You were there every step of the way.
But now you are gone!

She wishes you could feel her love!
I''m sorry for everything.

Sitting here wishing things could be different
Music playing and embracing this beautiful nature.

On my hands and knees crying and praying to God that one day she will find peace and getting back to you and I. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 131 [topic] => 32 [informant] => FindingMyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Fell

Contributed by FindingMyself on Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 12:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Fell into a dark hole
Fell from the building of something new.

She tries to repair herself but every obstacle is stopping her.
She feels like these are never ending trials and tribulations

He is moving on so quick!
She knows she can''t go to you for anything anymore.
She bleeds of love for you with her flesh and soul!

Pushing past all of the pain and tears
And trying to end her day with nothing but positive thoughts and a smile.

Finding the comfort in God,writing,playing soccer and dancing just doesn''t seem like it is enough.
Constantly searching for peace, she is still falling!

She isn''t giving up!

Starting to realize the only man she is good enough for is God.
Wishing she was good enough for the man of her dreams.

The past year consisted of many mistakes but somewhat finding the women she is suppose to be.
You were there every step of the way.
But now you are gone!

She wishes you could feel her love!
I''m sorry for everything.

Sitting here wishing things could be different
Music playing and embracing this beautiful nature.

On my hands and knees crying and praying to God that one day she will find peace and getting back to you and I.




Copyright © FindingMyself ... [ 2014-08-18 12:20:03]
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Re: Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by steven_fenton123 on Monday, 18th August 2014 @ 04:22:32 PM AEST
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I really like this!


Re: Fell (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackheart on Tuesday, 19th August 2014 @ 10:45:05 AM AEST
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Sadness written elegantly where I wholeheartedly see your struggle. Try your best to stay strong, stay in touch with God and continue to search for peace. It's inevitable for you to obtain and you WILL be better...you WILL be happy - sooner than later. Beautiful poem, I love this

Hugs & love,
Donavan




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