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come lay your head on this pillow
Of soft green grass
Lay down your head close your eyes

Watch me swing
Listen to the branches creak
A dead man is no company for a girl so alive

You decorate me with daises your heart beat keeps this hollow shell warm

In you dreams of tomorrow
So sweet but on time borrowed
Will be met with sorrow
Because we both know it's true
I lay here dead under this willow
Six feet below
Guarding you as you rest on a grass pillow

Here is only where the dreams feel true
Here is only where I can love you
So lay down close your eyes
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Come deep in the meadow under our willow

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 05:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Come deep in the meadow under our willow
come lay your head on this pillow
Of soft green grass
Lay down your head close your eyes

Watch me swing
Listen to the branches creak
A dead man is no company for a girl so alive

You decorate me with daises your heart beat keeps this hollow shell warm

In you dreams of tomorrow
So sweet but on time borrowed
Will be met with sorrow
Because we both know it's true
I lay here dead under this willow
Six feet below
Guarding you as you rest on a grass pillow

Here is only where the dreams feel true
Here is only where I can love you
So lay down close your eyes
A dead man is no company for a girl so alive

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2014-08-16 17:47:42]
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Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 06:31:34 PM AEST
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Yet as life ends, so life does begin. I liked the story within the story, and the true heart it symbols. Very strong, emotional write, P

Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 08:34:27 PM AEST
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beautiful .. an open invite to beauty.
Free... relaxing spirit, is the best of all
imagery. It brought me to view the calm.
Thanks!

Peace!

Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 09:54:14 PM AEST
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You wrote a scene for us to watch.."Watch me swing. Listen to the branches creak"..
I love the line "Here is only where the dreams feel true"…
You have left me to suppose that as we walk among headstones, thousands of generations walk with us.
softerware

Re: Come deep in the meadow under our willow (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:28:34 PM AEST
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So deeply moving a verse, I have a couple tears.
Beautiful!

Michelle

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