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Array ( [sid] => 179032 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TWO WINDMILLS [time] => 2014-08-08 17:15:20 [hometext] => touch the rainbow touch the windmill on the yellow brick road, silver man take me home [bodytext] => Two windmills set apart set in a field set ablaze by the sunset
thats the image i first saw bring 4th your love
two things i talk of you stalk i desire come get
shadowing turmoil spoken land owner its turbines princess he said
sounds like hunt i called him and sank down to the tennis court with a shadow instead
and cried in the ear of that shadow of shadows and your silver back stuck in my head

oh oh now how so so no dont go talk it up like yeah.

unfinished sympathy
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TWO WINDMILLS

Contributed by alicewhite on Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 05:15:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Two windmills set apart set in a field set ablaze by the sunset
thats the image i first saw bring 4th your love
two things i talk of you stalk i desire come get
shadowing turmoil spoken land owner its turbines princess he said
sounds like hunt i called him and sank down to the tennis court with a shadow instead
and cried in the ear of that shadow of shadows and your silver back stuck in my head

oh oh now how so so no dont go talk it up like yeah.

unfinished sympathy
unfinished

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2014-08-08 17:15:20]
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Re: TWO WINDMILLS (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 12:44:12 PM AEST
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Definitely an abstract moment unto myself at least although one can sense the depth it's words have been drawn from..Also, i love the creativity as somewhat uniqueness: very cool and may 'Sympathy find her heart....

Re: TWO WINDMILLS (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 10th August 2014 @ 10:20:55 PM AEST
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Very different and unique from what I usually see here, I like it the first line drew me in until the end
good read hope to read more
-Voice

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