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Mold your…
Dream for your…
Torches lit in the darkness guiding a clear paved path.
I can’t change your…
I can’t promise your…
Hoping that you see that I had nothing to do with your past.
I can’t be…
I can’t sell myself…
Waiting for you to come around and decide that you want…
I cant continue to be your…
I’ll try to win your…
But if that fortress that surrounds your heart stops my progress.
How am I supposed to…
How will I continue to show you…
Together is the only way this will work.
But, I can’t be a part of your…
Waiting for you…to decide.
But I know now I can never…change you.
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Change You

Contributed by desciple on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 12:51:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I realized today that I can’t change your…
Mold your…
Dream for your…
Torches lit in the darkness guiding a clear paved path.
I can’t change your…
I can’t promise your…
Hoping that you see that I had nothing to do with your past.
I can’t be…
I can’t sell myself…
Waiting for you to come around and decide that you want…
I cant continue to be your…
I’ll try to win your…
But if that fortress that surrounds your heart stops my progress.
How am I supposed to…
How will I continue to show you…
Together is the only way this will work.
But, I can’t be a part of your…
Waiting for you…to decide.
But I know now I can never…change you.




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Re: Change You (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 07:46:48 PM AEST
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I can truly relate to this lovely poem. It's so hard to let go of that one you love yet is missing that one thing. Like a cake mix without eggs--it won't rise and amount to anything, sadly. Take care, may love find its way back to you, and God bless,

Deidra


Re: Change You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 12:29:27 AM AEST
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Absolutely love the way this reads. Excellent indeed.

I rarely give unsolicited advice but I'm making an exception.

One should never try to change the other in a relationship or expect change. If this is a real situation, take heed. smiley photo cid_36B6C8ADACBB41FA8597AE4A78C7B78.gif

Just my thirty five cents (inflation ya' know). wink photo cid_03C8030E2C7C492BA509D7B6A42B528.gif

Tim




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