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that nobody knows
Here are the roots
from which it grows
Here are the roses
on which it sleeps
and those are the thorns
that it must keep
Here is the wind
Where will it blow
Please take this secret
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This Secret

Contributed by kailas on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:09:08 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Here is a secret
that nobody knows
Here are the roots
from which it grows
Here are the roses
on which it sleeps
and those are the thorns
that it must keep
Here is the wind
Where will it blow
Please take this secret
no one will know.

Copyright © kailas ... [ 2014-08-03 01:09:08]
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Re: This Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:16:29 AM AEST
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truly so beautifully penned, now i want to know the secret! lol,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: This Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:51:30 AM AEST
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Such a perfect flow! I like it! Naturally the reader also wants to know the secret. Obviously it's no one's business.

Hope all is well with you.

Tim

Re: This Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 02:53:13 AM AEST
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sadly the secret seems buried
Just where its roots call home no one seems to know

Will the wind carry its thorny
crown

Or will the wind blow it by your town
stuck in a cloud that could never
rain down

If you've tried too hard to dig too deep
its root is torn no longer the flower
your promise might wish to keep

I love this "Secret" a scrambled matrices
poem sadly too many dare not seem to wish to share

Oh think of the cost which is bothersome
to clearly define the obvious that divides us all

What is enough of a rose that might bloom
only to display Love

Dandy write Kailas!
Peace!

Re: This Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 12:56:00 PM AEST
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this write is amazing, very powerful..I enjoyed it
blessings...Keep sharing

Re: This Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnRhinem on Tuesday, 5th August 2014 @ 02:04:36 PM AEST
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Tis so lovely, these petals attached unto, her rose ~ Some poems simply feel beautiful....KLove *

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