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oh mr. black snake you shine in the sun
funny you will not bite me- nor i to run
today your mate came into the kitchen
indeed after little fluffy chicks again
quite the nervy girl as i asked her why
this hissing at me as i moved her aside
opening the window- i plucked her up
out she went with a quiet gentle thump
although i was naked i was quite brave
now i plead to the two of you- behave!
§* *§
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black snake
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 05:28:17 PM in AEST
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oh mr. black snake you shine in the sun
funny you will not bite me- nor i to run
today your mate came into the kitchen
indeed after little fluffy chicks again
quite the nervy girl as i asked her why
this hissing at me as i moved her aside
opening the window- i plucked her up
out she went with a quiet gentle thump
although i was naked i was quite brave
now i plead to the two of you- behave!
§* *§
*|*
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Re: black snake
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 05:49:20 PM AEST
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| Oh what fun this write is!! I would freak out if I saw a snake - have done so on many occasions - but I loved how you handled the situation. Great write, loved it - and your imagery - amazing, P |
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Re: black snake
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 06:25:19 PM AEST
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Fortunately we don't have snakes here in the UK.
Quite a chilling account though.
Glad you came to no harm.
Steve |
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Re: black snake
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 11:45:34 PM AEST
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Heeheehee So did anyone else notice that you gots chicks in your kitchen? Poor snakey poos just wanted some tender vittles.
Pass the butter, please, I'ms a gonna have me one of dems chicks.
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Re: black snake
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 09:19:50 AM AEST
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cute! A perfect little gem to spark a smile!
Thanks!
Invierno |
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Re: black snake
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by Jsrogers on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 09:45:39 AM AEST
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| I would like to hear more about this naked woman and the female snake; a very potent image! |
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Re: black snake
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by colinb on
Saturday, 2nd August 2014 @ 01:59:16 PM AEST
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| those black snakes can be sneaky LOL glad the chicks survived |
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 07:53:14 PM AEST
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well, happy it was u and not me. I have a king snake that hangout round here, I petted it when it was small. the next time I saw Kojak he was grown and big, course I want pet it now tho.
Great write girlfriend,
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: black snake
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by Voices-Ghost on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 08:14:20 AM AEST
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My Dear Nessa,
You have some of the most wonderful adventures!
I am glad that you and the other chicks survived...lol
Keep the great writes coming...
Hugs & Love,
Voices-Ghost |
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Re: black snake
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by JackM on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 12:07:22 PM AEST
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| I like the naked part. |
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Re: black snake
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by spud on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 01:39:11 PM AEST
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Hi Nessa,
Standing naked trying to deliberate with
a snake!!?? Does this happen often, and do
you and the snakes cross swords on a regular
basis?
Your words were ''cool'' personified.
Well done! Well said!
T
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Re: black snake
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by JohnRhinem on
Friday, 8th August 2014 @ 04:26:51 PM AEST
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| So cute as also exotic ~ Their little creations living this life baby eyes smiling at such, a beautiful sight.... |
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Re: black snake
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by Spike on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 07:25:31 PM AEST
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| Snakes, naked bodies, and in your Garden of Eden? I'll stick to viewing your account as shooing snakes from the larder, and leave the metaphors for others...S |
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Re: black snake
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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Hello Nessa
Well a very funny write all be it a dangerous situation. Me I'm petrified of snakes. Wen I was in the military they thought us in our survival training how to make a meal of a snake. So I'd say that snake was lucky to cross your path and not mine cause it would be in a pot LoL. Great write as always.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: black snake
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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You could teach Indiana Jones a thing, or two. ;)
I love the way you wrote this. It gave me a chuckle even as I was shuddering at the thought. Finding a random snake in my home? Umm, no. The only thing that would be "out" with a thump would be me...You're a brave woman, Nessa!
~Scorp |
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by Flex4life13 on
Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 06:33:54 PM AEST
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| This is oh so playfully charming! Just charming! |
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 07:50:35 PM AEST
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| lots of fun Nessa! i loved reading this. not what i was expecting, but i needed it. thanks |
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Re: black snake
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 03:35:39 AM AEST
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| As I sed to live in North Carolina my sentiment is Stay out of my house snakes or die!!!!! I loved this poem and its sentiment. |
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