Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 14:16:03 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 17885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Hate You For Hurting Me [time] => 2003-05-21 01:05:00 [hometext] => this is a heartfelt one about one of my x's n his new girlfriend that he keeps pushing in my face!! so to him !! GET A LIFE [bodytext] => i never thought you could hurt me like this!
i never thought you'd go out with that *****!
i never thought you'd say what you said!
i never thought i'd get so messed up in my head!

i remember the times we cuddled up on the couch
i remember the times we sat at school n we slouched
i remember exactly just what i did wrong
i remember exactly i dragged it out for too long!

you said we were in love and that nothing could take that away
but now you seem to hate me so i envision you in pain
i hope that you now suffer for all the pain that you caused me
but i hope that one day you will truely just miss being with me!

i miss holding your hand i miss seeing your smile
even though to you it may seem worthless, to me it seemed worthwhile
you could never understand the pain that came with your words
you never saw the tears or how hard the lessons were to learn.

now you have a "special someone" i hope she burns in hell
for the last time i looked at you my heart it seemed like it fell
how i long to make you pay for the way you screwed me up
but inside i know that you'll always be my little buttercup

so understand that i mean you harm hand harm i intend to do
but i know ways to hurt you ste ways that no-one knows but you
so once more my love i warn you to get her out of my site
because if i ever see her.. ill put up more than a ***** fight!
goodbye my love i'll miss you so
but just so you know you have to go!

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 547 [topic] => 36 [informant] => midian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I Hate You For Hurting Me

Contributed by midian on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



i never thought you could hurt me like this!
i never thought you'd go out with that *****!
i never thought you'd say what you said!
i never thought i'd get so messed up in my head!

i remember the times we cuddled up on the couch
i remember the times we sat at school n we slouched
i remember exactly just what i did wrong
i remember exactly i dragged it out for too long!

you said we were in love and that nothing could take that away
but now you seem to hate me so i envision you in pain
i hope that you now suffer for all the pain that you caused me
but i hope that one day you will truely just miss being with me!

i miss holding your hand i miss seeing your smile
even though to you it may seem worthless, to me it seemed worthwhile
you could never understand the pain that came with your words
you never saw the tears or how hard the lessons were to learn.

now you have a "special someone" i hope she burns in hell
for the last time i looked at you my heart it seemed like it fell
how i long to make you pay for the way you screwed me up
but inside i know that you'll always be my little buttercup

so understand that i mean you harm hand harm i intend to do
but i know ways to hurt you ste ways that no-one knows but you
so once more my love i warn you to get her out of my site
because if i ever see her.. ill put up more than a ***** fight!
goodbye my love i'll miss you so
but just so you know you have to go!





Copyright © midian ... [ 2003-05-21 01:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:33:18 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Quite the powerful piece of work there. it's nice, thanks for sharing a lot of feeling and emotion I like that.
Always amy


Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me (User Rating: 1 )
by obsidian_angel on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:14:48 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
just wanted to express my feelings for your poem. its really good and i can really relate, believe me i know just how you feel.

good on you- obsidian_angel


Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:44:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
it's a paradox isn't it??
Good poem... deserves alot more than one star.


Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
An extreemly powerful write for a youngish poet. Venomous. Keep going it can only get better. I gave it 3

I hope I'll be forgiven for pushing my own work but I wrote "He's not the only one" for
many of the young disappointed girls that write on YPDC.


Re: I Hate You For Hurting Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 10:09:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
brilliant write. truely amazing. the lack of comments on your poems are starting to bother me because you deserve so many. you showed an excellent amount of anger, emotion, power, etc. you wrote it in format, even harder. you actually format in stanzas, shows you know a bit more than a lot of people on this site. you know that not every verse has to have an exclamation point to show feeling. the fact that in the first two stanzas that you used the same beginning of the verse over and over without me noticing (which i usually notice) shows how well this was written.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com