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We seam to never have enough time
We are all on the clock, I say
With the tick,tock of the day

We miss the good things that happen
The funny things others do
The insignificant yet important time
Time that we rush and waist waiting
Be here, go there, saying sorry I'm late all the time
I have only one life, one time

Stop the madness and look
Look at the world and its marvels
Chill, breath, relax and enjoy
Life led like riding the bullet train
Ain't no life at all
Walk the earth, like Caine in Kung Fu
And the beauty of it's majesty will be visible to you

By banjosandwitch 25/05/14 LINK http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kwai_Chang_Caine
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Stop, look

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 05:33:51 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Stop, look

We seam to never have enough time
We are all on the clock, I say
With the tick,tock of the day

We miss the good things that happen
The funny things others do
The insignificant yet important time
Time that we rush and waist waiting
Be here, go there, saying sorry I'm late all the time
I have only one life, one time

Stop the madness and look
Look at the world and its marvels
Chill, breath, relax and enjoy
Life led like riding the bullet train
Ain't no life at all
Walk the earth, like Caine in Kung Fu
And the beauty of it's majesty will be visible to you

By banjosandwitch 25/05/14 LINK http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kwai_Chang_Caine

Copyright © banjosandwitch ... [ 2014-07-15 05:33:51]
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Re: Stop, look (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 10:03:40 AM AEST
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You're welcome. I like the words and thoughts in this one. Great points!

I used to love watching that show too!

Thanks,

Tim

Re: Stop, look (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 07:09:25 PM AEST
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Perhaps we should all just throw away our watches and not get hung up on the passing of time right before our eyes.
I agree, time rules our lives, we always think we don't have enough of it.

Interesting write.

Steve

Re: Stop, look (User Rating: 1 )
by kmec1990 on Sunday, 7th December 2014 @ 10:44:31 AM AEST
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Another great reminder, most people waste so much time being angry hurt or worst yet afraid, this kind of clarity usually only comes when faced with your own immorality. Very inciteful.
Thanks for sharing
Kris

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