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Array ( [sid] => 178765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who are you to me? [time] => 2014-07-11 02:24:30 [hometext] => A recognition and a thank you for all the years I have felt welcome to return to YPDC [bodytext] => Life seeps through the pores of my skin and saturates

My mind,chemistry bubbles in sustaining cycles and I

Do what I need to do,what I have to do.

Creativity in dormancy plays the waiting game till flesh

Cannot contain nor hold,and I am compelled as words

Become the feral expression in unrecognised sterility.

In a world of instant communication with the soul on bypass

My toes allowed the balm of accepting waters,and years of

Expression,pages for my voice,freedom for who I am,

And I can return always to YPDC.
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Who are you to me?

Contributed by northernlights on Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 02:24:30 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

Life seeps through the pores of my skin and saturates

My mind,chemistry bubbles in sustaining cycles and I

Do what I need to do,what I have to do.

Creativity in dormancy plays the waiting game till flesh

Cannot contain nor hold,and I am compelled as words

Become the feral expression in unrecognised sterility.

In a world of instant communication with the soul on bypass

My toes allowed the balm of accepting waters,and years of

Expression,pages for my voice,freedom for who I am,

And I can return always to YPDC.

Copyright Â© northernlights ... [ 2014-07-11 02:24:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 09:31:02 PM AEST
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Yes, and please continue to return.... PLEASE!!! And thank you .

Wait, I just got a text message...hmmm..hmm..hmm..hmmm... ;-) just kidding but it really struck me and made me think about the mindless blobs with their noses in their phones at work when I read the line about instant communication with the soul on bypass.

We love you too, Anna. ♥

Tim

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 07:54:39 AM AEST
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Well, I'm so happy when u do come back 'cause I miss ya writing when u r not posting.
Great job as always.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th July 2014 @ 08:29:59 PM AEST
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Northernlights - this is so expressive and says so much about ones soul... and what words can do.

"Who are you to me?" is an absolutely brilliant title to this well written poem.

Peace!

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:52:36 AM AEST
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We're so glad that you DO come back to YPDC!
I have so many favorite turns of phrase here:
"words become the feral expression".."with the soul on bypass"…and most of all "pages for my voice"!
Food for the soul of every aspiring writer.
It is WE who are thankful, northern lights!
softerware

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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What a great dissection of our human condition. So very well done!

Didn't know you were gone, being a newbie here myself. But, that said, I am glad to be able to read your words.

Thanks,

Invierno

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th July 2014 @ 10:28:23 PM AEST
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you write so truly beautifully, every line always full of imagery
and heart moving eloquence, we do not know each other well
yet altho i am in awe of some of the things you pen, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Who are you to me? (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 08:10:46 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,

The pen writes, and having writ ..................

YPDC is your home - don't go anywhere or we'll
send out search parties!

T
x

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