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Array ( [sid] => 178726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Artist [time] => 2014-07-06 20:46:34 [hometext] => Just something I thought Of... [bodytext] => I breathe out of control…but on the inside,
Counting each breath, calculating each decision that I make.
Slowly, plotting the next move.
Writing formulated plans so each word flows without mistake.
Practice makes better,
Candle lit dinners, sweet love letters.
Whispers of loving you till the end of time makes you think of us will last forever.
Ha how Clever…
Poetry written with the eloquence of sheer sublime.
My beautiful lady, my heart, my world…
Words to make you believe that you are all mine.
A world with no decision, would be no decision if the thought of you were erased from my mind.
Daily reminders to tell you that you’re my heaven and without you…
I would be left behind.
Silly, I know…but the words just seamlessly flow.
From the adjectives and verbs that help this vernacular
Seems some quite…well, I’ll admit it…spectacular.
A touch of elegance,
Refined by the reverence that is my benevolence.
Sad, Alone, Lost…is what you’ll feel when I make my exodus.
Without even a bat of an eyelash of how it could be done so impetuous.

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The Artist

Contributed by desciple on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 08:46:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I breathe out of control…but on the inside,
Counting each breath, calculating each decision that I make.
Slowly, plotting the next move.
Writing formulated plans so each word flows without mistake.
Practice makes better,
Candle lit dinners, sweet love letters.
Whispers of loving you till the end of time makes you think of us will last forever.
Ha how Clever…
Poetry written with the eloquence of sheer sublime.
My beautiful lady, my heart, my world…
Words to make you believe that you are all mine.
A world with no decision, would be no decision if the thought of you were erased from my mind.
Daily reminders to tell you that you’re my heaven and without you…
I would be left behind.
Silly, I know…but the words just seamlessly flow.
From the adjectives and verbs that help this vernacular
Seems some quite…well, I’ll admit it…spectacular.
A touch of elegance,
Refined by the reverence that is my benevolence.
Sad, Alone, Lost…is what you’ll feel when I make my exodus.
Without even a bat of an eyelash of how it could be done so impetuous.

Copyright Â© desciple ... [ 2014-07-06 20:46:34]
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Re: The Artist (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 08:56:42 PM AEST
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What a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep on penning. Keep up with the great work. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.

*S* Cynthia

Re: The Artist (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 8th July 2014 @ 05:23:17 PM AEST
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you are a beautiful poet, altho- you eloquently speak of love
for her and don't want her to leave yet- at the end speak of
your exodus, so you plan on departure before she does?

hugs n' love nessa

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