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[aid] => mick
[title] => ~~ Incomplete ~~
[time] => 2014-07-03 16:15:17
[hometext] => ...like the night skies without stars.....
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~~^~~
Incomplete
Like the night skies without the stars
Empty
Like a highway without any cars
Cold and dark
Like a mansion without love and light
Desolate
Like the country roads at midnight.
Barren
Like the sands of the desert when it’s hot..
Deserted
Like the little island that time forgot.
*
*
*
This is how I feel tonight
Even though you are just within sight.
~~^~~
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[counter] => 312
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[informant] => Jenni_K
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~~ Incomplete ~~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 04:15:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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~~^~~
Incomplete
Like the night skies without the stars
Empty
Like a highway without any cars
Cold and dark
Like a mansion without love and light
Desolate
Like the country roads at midnight.
Barren
Like the sands of the desert when it’s hot..
Deserted
Like the little island that time forgot.
*
*
*
This is how I feel tonight
Even though you are just within sight.
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2014-07-03 16:15:17]
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by Geneva1223 on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 04:21:22 PM AEST
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| wow i loved this poem... it got me emotional almost made me cry... you are a very good writer but keep hope alive |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 04:27:14 PM AEST
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heartbreak and imagery off the charts, each line a
vision of desolation- reach for the moon my friend; for
then you will land softly upon the stars, utilize these
moments, keep the ink flowing, your poetry is sooo
beautiful!
big hugs n' love nessa
roses at your feet |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 10:31:32 PM AEST
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:(
I remember those kinds of night, too! My dogs and music got me through. (Friends seemed too busy)
Definitely poetry in action! |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by weemick on
Thursday, 3rd July 2014 @ 11:37:31 PM AEST
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| Hi, It's always so sad that anyone has to feel this way. As nessa says sweetheart, reach for the moon, It Is always within the hearts reach. An excellent write with such powerful emotion sown Into It. Some poetry Is powerful and this Is one such piece. The moon awaits your chance to dance before It. The moonlight dance. They say Love Is the greatest joy and yet the deepest sorrow. Hang on to the moon. An excellent write. Have a good day. |
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by TheDreamer on
Friday, 4th July 2014 @ 12:53:56 AM AEST
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| This poem is amazing. I know this feeling and you articulated it beautifully! Well done! |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 08:23:23 PM AEST
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Jenni_K
WOW!!!! What a powerful write. I had to stop by to have a read. Great work. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia |
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by Pogivic on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 05:47:50 PM AEST
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| Love your poem. Loneliness sometimes comes to visit and a person can feel all alone in a crowd of people. I have experienced that feeling many times. |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by wheels on
Wednesday, 15th June 2016 @ 08:38:15 PM AEST
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| Hey Jen - it so sad I feel for you. I/'/ve been there - correct me if I/'/m wrong (had to check if I ever posted it "Alone with You" let me know if you have time if I/'/m correct or even close. K |
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Re: ~~ Incomplete ~~
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 11th April 2023 @ 11:24:51 AM AEST
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| Nature can seem as lonely as people. Your title is profound and honest for what you wrote. Excellent poignant poem. |
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