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Oy! What a Mess!
Contributed by
invierno
on
Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 04:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Amber fire marks me deep;
turning, twisting giving vent
to things most unremarkable, were
it not the way the fire went.
From belly stew to brain above,
where once despair, now reigns love;
in land of bleakness so I turned,
now with courage on a new sojourn.
Little things...prior, paid no heed,
now to my attentions find
a loud demand, (albeit in my mind)
growing quick expressed to written need.
But one, (of many) share I here;
how mighty prose, most deserved,
goes for pennies in this sea
of peopled sloth, most unlearned.
Wuthering Heights, a quarter cost,
while World of Warcrafts' far more sought;
The Seawolf bought one hundredth less
than crotchless panties; Oy! What a mess!
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-06-28 16:04:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Oy! What a Mess!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th June 2014 @ 07:17:45 PM AEST (User
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Hi Invierno,
Like this a lot and I wonder about its meaning a bit. In my case, I think there's trouble underfoot in our Central State of doing things. How to write about it is difficult without being forthright.
You are poetic here as always. I see the humor but also think there's a deeper meaning.
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